Eden Island Tour Story Poem
Eden Island, oh wondrously awesome
Offered to us free tour with grand welcome
Thus, we explored the paradise midst bliss
Enjoying all; nothing our hearts did miss.
Our first day with Adam and Eve was great
As they showed us day and night’s divine date
In survival quest with revival zest
Exalting God*, life’s Source, perfectly best.
Second day supplied us with wisdom gain
While we’re ushered to miracle terrain
Letting us behold firmament and sky
Separate from waters then soar so high.
Day three allowed us for landscapes’ treading spree
Where to hills, mounts, and valleys we could flee…
Witnessing how each precious seed could thrive
To yield fruit moved us for thanksgiving drive.
The fourth day had captivated our sight
With enthralling celestial delight
Sun, moon, and stars radiating their glow
Exuding gleam and beam of varied blow.
For the fifth day, we saw sea-life abound
In oceans or lakes where fishes are found
Then there are many fowls that fly above
Birds like eagle, robin sparrow and dove.
Sixth day held us amazed by the Lord hand
When He formed man and woman as He planned
After creating beasts of every kind
Based on His mind, sovereignly designed.
On the seventh day, we found ourselves filled
Indeed edified, spiritually thrilled
Worshipping the Almighty with glad praise
Giving glory to His marvelous ways.
Triumphant gratitude grips now my soul
Inspired to share my sublime tourist-role
And be heavenly kingdom faith’s tour guide
As in the Saviour’s side, I do abide.
*In the beginning God created the heaven and the earth.
July 16, 2023
2nd place, "Write a Story Poem" Narrative Poetry Writing Contest
Sponsored by Joanna Daniel; judged on 7/25/2023
Copyright © Beata Agustin | Year Posted 2023
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