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Author's Notes: Co-Authored this "Eden Calling" free verse poem with Liam McDaid on October 12, 2014. (Gary Bateman - October 19, 2014) (Free Verse)

Categories:  allegory, desire, devotion, emotions, feelings, metaphor, and miss you.

A ferocious storm battering outside heavy winds howling a wolf angry breaths pelting rain bullets hurl whistling apple of these eyes dreaming inside the howling moans feeling your caress deeply touching away our souls in another world kissing mist falling down weeping inside dreaming always with you by my side A deep sigh of pain yearning loves voice distant tears weeping from the heart and soul floating with light into another world blinded by everything one sees queen off the rainbow's mist through lashes bouquet colors sensing many emotions deeply felt crying happy crying sad crying glad dreaming always with you by my side Liam McDaid and Gary Bateman A Collaborative Poem - October 12, 2014 (Free Verse)

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Date: 11/8/2014 4:34:00 PM
Wow! What a wonderful poem! so deep!
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Date: 10/20/2014 10:19:00 AM
i like the way it jelled all together perfectly gary smiling
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Angeline Haikutwinkle
Date: 1/4/2017 1:05:00 AM
Here, I can see the starting point of both writings complimenting each other.
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Gary Bateman
Date: 10/21/2014 2:00:00 PM
PERFECT!! PERFECT!! Liam . . . Cheers, Gary

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