Notes About The Poem

Author's Notes: Co-Authored this "Eden Calling" free verse poem with Liam McDaid on October 12, 2014. (Gary Bateman - October 19, 2014) (Free Verse)

Categories:  allegory, desire, devotion, emotions, feelings, metaphor, and miss you.

Eden Calling

A ferocious storm battering outside  
heavy winds howling a wolf
angry breaths pelting rain bullets hurl
whistling apple of these eyes
dreaming inside the howling moans
feeling your caress deeply touching  
away our souls in another world kissing
mist falling down weeping inside
dreaming always with you by my side 
 
A deep sigh of pain yearning loves voice
distant tears weeping from the heart and soul
floating with light into another world
blinded by everything one sees
queen off the rainbow's mist 
through lashes bouquet colors
sensing many emotions deeply felt
crying happy crying sad crying glad 
dreaming always with you by my side
 
Liam McDaid and Gary Bateman
A Collaborative Poem - October 12, 2014
(Free Verse)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Ray Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 4:34 PM
Wow! What a wonderful poem! so deep!
Mcdaid Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 10:19 AM
i like the way it jelled all together perfectly gary smiling
Haikutwinkle Avatar
January 4, 2017 at 1:05 AM
Here, I can see the starting point of both writings complimenting each other.
Bateman Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 2:00 PM
PERFECT!! PERFECT!! Liam . . . Cheers, Gary
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