Eden

rainbow colours been darken
in a world of confusion
question marks all around
no hope from the horizen

the bustling tulips are fading
by not so far from the distance
a tear drop falls lonely
by the misty heavens

sky is filled with anguish
hostile is far reaching
in a world once there was ambition
now knocks on gates of eden.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Hall Mad Poet Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 1:42 PM
Sirajali welcome to the soup. An Excellent write.
Roberts Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 9:21 PM
really nice, enjoyed it
Sweetheart Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 9:21 PM
So enjoyed your very creative write tonight.. with luv..
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