Eddie On His Country Stroll

Hey I just love the countryside
it's so peaceful and full of calm
even when I don't meet a single soul
but come across a working farm

One time with the sun so bright
sweat was so prominent on my face
but the warmth was worth it all
a great start to the day in my place

Usually, I like being just on my own
but this day I met Edith on route
we got chatting about country life
finding both loved to be on foot

So Eddie(me) and Edith loved being together
especially walking seeing lovely scenes
romantic thoughts enter their hearts
a future together makes them keen

So both continue to love a stroll
hand in hand along step by step
being thankful for where they met
finding love within their lover's net!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 4/4/2023 8:54:00 AM
A most enjoyable walk, Gordon. Thanks for allowing us to tag along.
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 4/4/2023 9:12:00 AM
Thanks Daniel, Glad you enjoyed walking along with me, hope all is well with you. Regards, Gordon
Date: 4/4/2023 1:54:00 AM
Lovely poem sprinkled with romance, Gordon:)
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 4/4/2023 8:30:00 AM
Thanks Joanna, Glad you enjoyed this piece and trust all is well with you. Blessings, Gordon
Date: 4/3/2023 2:05:00 PM
A romantic country stroll, I love the peace of the countryside Gordon away from the hustle and bustle of the cities and towns. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 4/3/2023 2:11:00 PM
Thanks Tom, yes there's something about the countryside that brings peace. All is well here, trust things are good with you. Blessings,Gordon
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