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Edd the dog part 1

The bee as i watched, made its way over the fence with a buzz and a bumble doing its thing, tasting sweet nectar that flowers bring, im sure it has a smile on its face, im also sure it sings as sweet nectar it tastes, in and out of dappled sunlight it floats, while whistleing sweet music, sweet musical notes, i glance at the dog, also on the lawn sitting, as his eyes meet mine, i sense a smile from him too, then with taught reflex movement and a snap of the jaw, one dead bee crashes down to the floor. the dog sits back, with a smile in its eyes, i cant stand those bumbblers, im sure he contentedly sighs.

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Date: 5/25/2013 10:45:00 AM
ha a dog with a smile in his eye. I like this ED. great going Kevin..... where's part 2........ ~SKAT~
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Kevin Callaghan
Date: 11/12/2020 6:59:00 PM
Thanks me an edd have been on a mission for a few yrs but there is a par 2