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Ecstasy

Emily wasn't the same person I knew back in the City, as a silent girl in grade school. Everyone was Shocked to see her smiling and laughing, as she Told us about her life in a Zen Monastery Across a mysterious Chinese mountain. Sad silence in her life was replaced by Yearning for a ray of happiness.

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Date: 7/4/2016 4:01:00 PM
Hi Teddy, Congrats on your win in the contest! :-) Alexis
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/5/2016 3:08:00 AM
Hi Alexis. Thanks so much for your applause!! :-)
Date: 7/3/2016 6:47:00 AM
That's so new...seen ecstasy from that angle. Nice. congrats.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/4/2016 6:11:00 AM
Thank you so much for your applause, Sunita!!! *^_^*
Date: 6/29/2016 10:58:00 PM
a wonderful little story of the ecstasy that must have been Emily's.
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Date: 7/4/2016 6:09:00 AM
Thanks for enjoying the read, Andrea!! *^_^*
Date: 6/29/2016 1:02:00 PM
A 7 for this smoothly-flowing acrostic, Teddy! Janice
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/29/2016 7:25:00 PM
Thank you so much Janice!! *^_^*
Date: 6/29/2016 9:15:00 AM
"Ditto" on what Phil said. Great acrostic Teddy.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/29/2016 7:24:00 PM
Thanks for reading and enjoying my work, Daniel!! :-)
Date: 6/29/2016 8:50:00 AM
Nice acrostic, Teddy; aren't we all 'yearning for a ray of happiness'.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/29/2016 7:23:00 PM
Yes, we all yearn for that priceless, precious gift.... Thanks Phil, for commenting on my work!! :-)

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