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Eclipse of the Moon

tenderized neck bone ~ the ancient one sinks her pulse dire with sharpened fangs perplexed her face drains from purity to pallid ~ eclipse of the moon she weeps at her wake arrayed in satiny black shakes herself to sleep the blood moon brings her a perpetual nightmare candles of his eyes her tears fail to stain and soon she must grow hungry his fate her fate now snow white, razor sharp piercing her first victim hurts the first time the worst 5/31/2019

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Date: 6/2/2019 8:04:00 PM
Elegantly depicted, my friend. A bloody subject, cleanly (and keenly) crafted. Bravo. ~ gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/2/2019 8:06:00 PM
Thanks :)
Date: 5/31/2019 12:50:00 PM
Love it my friend. One can see and feel the dark evil in the vampire's bite.. A tender neck, a waiting kiss. A midnight curse, blood-lust sated. Woe to be! Those so ill fated.. A fav.. great dark poetry...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2019 4:47:00 PM
Thanks, Robert!

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