Eclipse Format

Format Of The Eclipse,
Danger of sunlight on my lips,
My eyes filled with terror, Deceit fill my heat
What goes around comes around, so that gravity may put me back on my feet
The moonlight on my hands
The stars up above, A twister filled twilight with only seductive love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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April 22, 2016 at 2:33 PM
A lovely poem Charlene...Welcome to the Soup..
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April 19, 2016 at 11:08 PM
Charlene Plummer, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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April 18, 2016 at 10:42 PM
Hi Charlene, Nice first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead........hugs.
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April 18, 2016 at 8:35 PM
This is dope , i ilkes
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April 18, 2016 at 8:15 PM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Charlene. :)
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