Eclipse

When the sun and the moon tango as one And the Earth looks on from afar A total eclipse would have begun And you'll be able to wish upon a star -- 8/21/17

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/21/2017 9:08:00 PM

What a lovely quatrain you have penned, dear Joseph! Quite a tribute to our wondrous eclipse. I am just as entranced by your words as I was with the viewing today! Hugs. Pandita

Joseph May
Date: 8/21/2017 10:39:00 PM

Thank you Pandita...

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 8/21/2017 12:54:00 PM

Nice :)

Joseph May
Date: 8/21/2017 2:05:00 PM

Thank you Maureen

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/21/2017 11:45:00 AM

Would be great if for a contest my friend...what the heck... a 1'st place for you Joseph...love the elliptical flow...god bless...^WW^

Joseph May
Date: 8/21/2017 2:04:00 PM

Thank you WW

Jan Allison

Date: 8/21/2017 11:26:00 AM

What lovely imagery, I really love that first line Jospeh - sadly we don't get a total eclipse here and anyway it is dull and rainy so there is no sun to see lol:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May
Date: 8/21/2017 2:03:00 PM

Thank you Jan

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/21/2017 10:45:00 AM

I like the tango part, Joseph! Great wording! I wonder if there is an eclipse contest, I will have to check. Unless all these eclipse poems are due to recent eclipse. :) Well done!

Joseph May
Date: 8/21/2017 10:58:00 AM

Thank you Heidi... I wish someone had thought of a contest to coincide with it...