Eclipse

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Bill Lindsay

Date: 8/21/2015 1:17:00 PM

such a wonderful scene painted in a few deft strokes ... this is not a form I have yet attempted, but having read this, I might just try it! Inspiring. ;)

Len Gasun
Date: 9/20/2015 1:28:00 AM

Oh, really? Thank you so much my very dear friend, Bill. In fact, this was my first/second attempt i think on this form of poem but it wasn't posted at once here. I think you gonna try it as well my dear friend anyway, this form needs only few words though quite difficult for me. Again, thank you, thank you sooo much! Many hugs to you!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/16/2015 2:34:00 PM

Leo, You are truly blessed with imagery my sis... Deeply done.... Sending hugs, my wonderful BFF... LINDA

Len Gasun
Date: 8/21/2015 11:40:00 AM

My dearest sis, it’s my great honor and pleasure to have your heartwarming visit with warm hugs and for reading your very wonderful feedback on my humble poem. I’m so sorry for coming only now cuz was out of the city for educ. trip and just came back yesterday. Sweetest hug back at you my loving and awesome sis- BFF! Have a wonderful day to you and your loved ones.

Skat A

Date: 8/13/2015 2:06:00 PM

an old poem I'm delighted to have gotten the chance to have read Leonora, enjoyed:), Luv Skat

Len Gasun
Date: 8/14/2015 11:03:00 AM

Thank you so much my very dear friend and sis Skat. Many hugs back at you! God bless!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/12/2015 8:33:00 PM

thanks for sharing. I enjoyed the read, Leonora. LIke Nette says, you made the eclipse romantic!

Len Gasun
Date: 8/14/2015 10:59:00 AM

Thank you so much my very dear friend, Andrea. Many hugs back at you! God bless!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/12/2015 2:41:00 AM

wow, i like the romantic imagery of this cinquain, lory.. how are you?.. hope all is well in bkk.. take care and let's talk soon.. huggs

Len Gasun
Date: 8/12/2015 3:50:00 AM

Hello my very dear friend, Nette! Thank you so much for your very lovely message and comments. i just woke up, no work today (1 day) so i always take a nap.. so tired always at schl. I'm taking a chance to rest. Later, i'll go out with my dearest mom to give her 2nd time mother's day treat. It's mothers day here (queen's bday), so stopping by a bit before we go out. Btw, this poem was written last year, so old already. Not yet posted at PS. Thank you, thank you so much again. Many hugs and kisses!