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Eclipse


soft sweet breath
feverish desire burns
air of silence
passion intensifed
mystical realm entices
heaven surrounds earth
emotions esculate
desire perpetulates
total eclipse

lovefree verse

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John Loving Iii

April 26, 2012 at 5:08 PM

a phenominal event. thank you for my bday greeting.

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 26, 2012 at 1:58 PM

How beautiful can it be said - always a pleasure to read your work Phyllis. Take care! - oxox love Anne-Lise

Debra Squyres

April 25, 2012 at 10:24 AM

Wow....very passionate poem...!!!

Andrea Dietrich

April 23, 2012 at 11:50 PM

Came here to thank you for the several comments and ask, did you google wilberforce? He helped England do away with slavery many years ago and is the main focus of the wonderful movie called "Amazing Grace."

James Peranteau

April 23, 2012 at 7:25 PM

Hello dear poet ! How are ya? It sure was nice bumping into this awesome write of yours Phyllis ! I just love the way you made me feel like I was engulfed in a sphere all of my own, and of course, feeling yours ! Wonderful write my friend ! Have a wonderful week Phyllis...much love, james

Carol Sunshine Brown

April 23, 2012 at 5:52 AM

Thank you for reading and commenting on my poetry. It is a pleasure to be able to read your outstanding writing Phyllis. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

April 22, 2012 at 10:52 PM

Hi, sweet lady. Joe talked over an hour with me tonight and now I am gonna get to bed REALLY late tonight. My goal is to get off here by 11. Luv, Andrea

Sashi Prabhu

April 21, 2012 at 10:27 PM

absolutely marvellous.... the last three lines stole my calm... ~sashi

Poet Destroyer A

April 21, 2012 at 6:17 PM

Phyllis, here to comment this again.. wow... like the song... "total eclipse of the heart",, I like the like and image of.." air of silence" a wonderful verse...always.~ PD

Laila Andresen Mjelde

April 21, 2012 at 2:23 AM

Excellent, wonderful and beautiful poem Phyllis! Hugs Laila

Poet Destroyer A

April 20, 2012 at 11:35 PM

Phyllis, this is wonderful..God bless.pd

Andrea Dietrich

April 20, 2012 at 9:10 PM

ooohhh. Yes, a total eclipse . that fits very nicely on the final line. I love the way this one just looks being centered how it is. WEll, I'm going off here soon. It was lovely seeing you had new poems up tonight!