Echos of Quiet

in the stillness of your last step away from me and the shivered breath of our final kiss I feel the depth of your empty space looming In the hollowness carried by my eyes and clenched in my smile as you vanished The bird song has stilled in my ears clouds have stopped their raining sound Without your laugh I hear only the echo of quiet in the chair where you should be reading where the sheets are still satin smooth in the stillness of your last step away from me and the shivered breath of our final kiss
9-5-2020 Song I - Cold - Quiet Now Poetry Contest Sponsored by: rob carmack

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Date: 9/23/2020 6:35:00 PM
So sad, beautiful, and moving, Jeanne. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/23/2020 9:12:00 PM
Very appreciated, Janice... Wasn't there some moving poems created?
Date: 9/23/2020 6:09:00 PM
Jeanne, the description is so good. Loss translated perfectly. A beautiful Win! My huge Congratulations for its top placement.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/23/2020 9:10:00 PM
Sincere thanks, Sigrid...
Date: 9/23/2020 5:23:00 PM
Nicely crafted Jeanne. Thank you for making my contest a success.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/23/2020 9:09:00 PM
Thank you Rob... You gave us a serious challenge and the poets rose splendidly to it. What a lot of amazing work crafted.
Date: 9/6/2020 11:46:00 AM
This is just great Jeanne, you captured so much. Best wishes Hugs, Panagiota xx
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/6/2020 1:26:00 PM
In a breath, thank you so much, for stopping to read, comment and encourage. Jeanne
Date: 9/5/2020 4:28:00 PM
This gem truly awes me my friend. A pleasure to read such poetry. A fav... God bless..
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/5/2020 6:31:00 PM
That is very kind of you to stop and comment. Thank you so much for the fav and so happy you enjoyed this write.
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