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Echoes of Your World

IF EVER THERE ARE REASONS TO RECORD THE UNHEARD SONGS WARM LIPS ALONE CREATE THE GODS EARN LESS THAN HEAVEN SHOULD THEIR FATE NOT NUMBER FIRST THE ECHOES OF YOUR WORLD

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/29/2019 9:22:00 PM

"to record the unheard songs warm lips alone create" - that is a poem by itself. It could stand alone and be a best selling poem if the reader would truly READ it.

David Lines
Date: 1/29/2019 9:45:00 PM

good evening Ms. Krutsinger, again, thank you for your comments, I've never done this before, (letting others read my stuff), it is heartening to have these newby poems be liked. Thank you again, tonight I will read your poems.