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Echoes of My Mind

A word spoken long ago Not meant to be unkind, Hurt another all the same, An echo of my mind. A thought was formed, no ill intent Fruitiion could not find; It lives there still in solitude, An echo of my mind. A deed was done--can't be recalled To help my thoughts unwind, I worry now for its effect An echo of my mind. The things I think and say or do Will through my life rewind; They all come back to me again The echoeds of my mind. Nov 17/09 D H Loewen

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Date: 4/22/2018 12:58:00 PM
Let those echoes , fall as ink onto paper. A poet's heart and mind needs its release. Write with both truth and purpose and the path has less dark turns and more peaceful dawns.. The mind, is a room, fill it with grand furniture, not plastic and selfish wishes my friend. I think you already see that... LET YOUR INK DISPLAY WHAT HEART AND MIND SEE. A fav..
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Date: 4/14/2018 8:20:00 AM
A nice concept...surely aids consciousness...the echo of my mind...All the best David...
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