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Echoes of Misery

I repeat myself over and over An endless string of blunder--- Knotted and tied with my affliction Ending nowhere but in damnation Echoes bouncing on walls and pillars While I’m locked under cellars--- My words falling with a clatter Echoes of bone-chilling isolation Over and over My voice travels in crevices of the river Slowly drowning in water I can see my reflection A figure of distortion--- Falling deeper and deeper Over and over.

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Date: 12/15/2024 8:48:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/4/2017 8:10:00 AM
Very harrowing, yet powerful poem, Ady. The laser focus of self-awareness is on full display in this gem of a poetic offering. Absolutely stunning poem, full of self-truth and damning pathos. Love this poem very much. Happy New Year. Love and peace to you. Romantic Warrior
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Ady Ferrer
Date: 1/6/2017 1:14:00 AM
Thank you, that means a lot. Happy New Year too!

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