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Echoes of Liminal Light

they slither down the long halls coiling thoughts like vine-sharp calls calm defies walls lean in with breathing cracks truth waits, but never walks back you flicker—don’t ask why their whispers rise like flood and tide but roots hold beneath the lie you break—and light slips quietly by

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Date: 7/26/2025 4:11:00 PM
wonderful imagery and flow to your poem. I'm glad to see that the 'light' won over lies. It happens, given time. Well done, hugs, Sara
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/26/2025 5:07:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sara! I'm really touched by your words. Yes, light does win—sometimes slowly, but surely. Big hugs back to you!
Date: 7/26/2025 11:48:00 AM
This is sure interesting, with lots of evocative imagery. It sounds like light triumphing over insidious lies.
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/26/2025 5:07:00 PM
Thanks David! Yeah, that’s exactly the vibe—like truth finally shining through all the hidden lies. Appreciate you picking up on that!

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