Echoes of Hard Times

I felt it like the storm
I called it my trying times
During my dying time.
In rear times.

But the moon looked at me with pity
As the Sun wished it could dry my tears 
By shining so brightly.

My pain wrapped itself around me
Like a blanket around a suckling child
Without her mother.

Although the stars watched over me 
But couldn’t help with an antidote
For my disease.


I slept so calmly but still dancing to 
the tunes coming from the forest of 
my sorrows like thorns.


I felt the hotness of those tears
As they trickle down my chin
 Without permission.

With both hands I tabled my problems
To the one above, for I know the storm 
Would soon be over.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 4/14/2020 10:04:00 AM
Very nice composition! I love reading it! I like.the imagery used.
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Date: 9/1/2018 11:02:00 AM
Just stopped by today to reread this lovely verse... pray all is well with you and yours!! Write on!! Peace and blessings =D James
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Date: 5/30/2018 9:04:00 PM
Sherifat....Was this a poem for you ? Please reply
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Date: 2/15/2018 2:48:00 PM
Nice piece. You seem to have a good descriptive capacity; invest into it.
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Date: 2/2/2018 4:29:00 AM
Positive..."With both hands I tabled my problems To the one above" You must let it go...All the best
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Date: 1/26/2018 11:16:00 AM
Beautifully relayed, love the title.
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Date: 1/23/2018 1:26:00 PM
one can feel your pain and see nature watching over you.
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Date: 1/19/2018 10:48:00 PM
Lovely verse, great read blessed new year. WRITE ON James
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