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Written on December 22, 2023

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Kindness remembers, Legendary stars glistening In her eyes – such wisdom Gentle and graceful, Intimate as the stirring From a heart who listens, A heart who sighs contentment. Kindness remembers, Shadows kissing away the dark, Lifting the night and breaking apart The silence, with enlightenment Songs of melodious praise, Erasing the yesterdays When hearts were so fearful, Destined to the anxious places, Where worry concealed the light, The music of a light so alive, breathless Twinkling stars, hung high in the skies. Kindness remembers, Listening with a heart who believes Forever and ever – she sees… She sees the wonder in belief!

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Date: 12/22/2023 4:23:00 PM
I love how you personified kindness...brilliant...intimate, gentle, and graceful. I especially liked 'kindness remembers.' Thanks for planting the seeds of kindness in our hearts. Merry Christmas, Sara
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Date: 12/22/2023 11:12:00 AM
Gina my friend you have beautifully captured the essence of kindness as a timeless and transformative force. The repetition of the phrase "Kindness remembers" serves as a poignant reminder of the enduring nature of benevolence.. you establish a connection between kindness and the profound wisdom that emanates from a compassionate heart. The use of stars as a metaphor suggests the enduring and luminous nature of the kindness reflected in the eyes...
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Date: 12/22/2023 7:28:00 AM
What a wonderful write/picture. Love It... Merry Christmas..................
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