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ECHOES OF DARKNESS PT 1

Part 1 - Denial set the tone for my transgressions . It all began on this day , the day she decided to help with what I’ve come to know as temporary heartbreak . She told me it was going to to be okay , but in that brief moment of reassurance I looked into her eyes , trying to find something i had lost ; ”comfort” but   She however , was void of this fact. Days went by and within these days I took it upon myself to dedicate a specific period of my day to continually intoxicate myself with her presence as it provided me with  the emotionally healing  drug which I had found with her that day and like all drug dealers,  She provided this bountifully . After a while, addiction became the new name for what I was doing . To those around us , it was condemned not only because of its dangers but for the important fact that presented itself as her lover . Of course  I denied this fact . But unfortunately , they had planted the seed of question in my heart and like every other seed  , it took its roots and  grew into a tree . I found myself constantly being tormented with thoughts of whether or not I had feelings for this girl , my supposed helper , had I stupidly fallen in love with her ? .These were the questions that ransacked my mind , when suddenly , I was brought back to reality by the sound of her voice, asking me if I was alright . I looked at her , I looked into her eyes , and at that very moment , I felt it . The ultimate surge of a thousand memories , rushing in and playing themselves scene after scene before my very eyes and then I knew . Then I knew ,what I had stepped into and my feet sank , it sank and kept pulling  me along with it ; and to my amusement , I did not resist . I had let myself fall into this endless abyss , that is called love .”I’m in  love with you” , I said , and as she turned to reply …

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Date: 3/8/2016 11:39:00 AM
Nice to see this one again
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Date: 1/10/2016 3:47:00 PM
Hope to see you back this year.. Hugs. SKAT 2016
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Date: 6/27/2015 9:36:00 PM
Hi MOFE.. this is a powerful, well constructed write, that I enjoyed reading today! I want to WELCOME you to Poetry Soup, a great place to display your creative, artist works. It's also an ideal place to meet and be shaped by other poets. I read a lot of poems and I'm looking forward to checking out more of your works. PS.. If you have a moment, check out my poems as well. I'm looking forward to becoming friends with those who do (Iron sharpens Iron).. Talk soon, LYRIC MAN
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Date: 6/21/2015 1:26:00 PM
- Welcome to P Soup, Mofe ! - A poem that warms your heart or relieve your pain ... share your own poems here with us - Write poems and send it out into the world, I look forward to your next poem :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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mofe Onuwaje
Date: 6/22/2015 1:26:00 AM
wow , Thank you so much
Date: 6/21/2015 1:36:00 AM
Hi Mofe O, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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mofe Onuwaje
Date: 6/22/2015 1:27:00 AM
Haha , alright . Thank you Skat , I just messsaged you so
Date: 6/21/2015 12:48:00 AM
Mofe O, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/22/2015 1:28:00 AM
haha , thank you so much , I like your poems too