Echoes of Brilliant Blue

Echoes of brilliant blue as it dims at dusk,
a rebirth in the sweet scent of cool moist earth.
A lapis lazuli before dawn, mere husk,
a bond with no interest in severing.
Subdued by loving and ever endeavoring
to pluck the ripened unearth passion fruit worth
the heart of the ocean both wild and calm musk.

8/13/2018

2.) Echoes of brilliant blue, A-B-A-C-C-B-A rhyme

Poetry Contest: Rhyme Time 6 - Verses Of Metaphors 
Sponsored by: Laura Loo

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Date: 9/11/2018 6:57:00 AM
beautiful imagery sweet Eve! Lovely poem all around..Thank you for your participation and congrats on your placement..-luloo
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Date: 8/17/2018 6:44:00 AM
Lovely and lyrical, especially like the last couplet--congrats,Eve!
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Date: 8/17/2018 6:10:00 AM
Excellent piece, well done on your win. Faux
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Date: 8/17/2018 12:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Date: 8/15/2018 8:33:00 PM
Beautiful imagery in your lovely Rhyme, Eve! Congratulations on your fine placement on this short list of winners! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/15/2018 7:10:00 AM
Lovely, Eve! Congratulations! ...Fran
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Date: 8/15/2018 5:45:00 AM
The heart of the ocean is many things to many people. I never heard it described as a calm musk. The next time I visit the ocean I will try and inhale the musk dear poetess. I loved your entry. Thanks for sharing and have a blessed day . Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/14/2018 4:16:00 PM
ever flowing like sweet honey on the lips, eve... lovely and vivid work!..huggs
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Date: 8/14/2018 10:43:00 AM
Beautifully done. Much luck in the contest my friend.
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Date: 8/13/2018 8:48:00 PM
Echoes of brilliant poetry, Eve...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 8/13/2018 8:04:00 PM
Such a beautiful rhyme, Eve.. Absolutely perfect imagery.. Fantastic!! One of my favs.. Many blessings!
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Date: 8/13/2018 6:51:00 PM
Your words are like a bouquet of flowers that brighten the senses and make us feel alive, one with nature. Emile.
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