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Echoes of Autumn

Fading gentle touch,
Echoes drift like autumn leaves—
Sweetness slips away.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/10/2025 8:32:00 PM

Love that center line, Rowena! I sense a bit of nostalgia!

Rowena Velasco
Date: 8/10/2025 8:38:00 PM

Thank you Kim!

John Fleming

Date: 7/26/2025 6:15:00 PM

Absolute genius...and I mean every word I just wrote. I am truly astounded that I am the very first person to comment here. What the hell is the matter with people? This is REAL POETRY, people. I would have thought POTD at the very least. Shameful! A very beautiful little poem...really it is. My very best regards, Rowena! :) john

Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/26/2025 7:01:00 PM

John, you just made my day! Seriously, thank you. Grateful for your kindness and big heart.