Echoes of a Spark

within spiraled arms
   a wisp of life is hidden…
       cradled by a star

        ~12 Dec 2015~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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January 31, 2016 at 10:22 PM
DAVID, Congrats on your win in "Edward Ebbs" contest. LINDA -
Selfa Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 8:47 AM
Congratulations David! You deserve the win! I can't believe this one had received an NA before.
A  Avatar
January 24, 2016 at 10:13 PM
DAVID, Congrats on your awesome, win. Luv **SKAT**
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January 24, 2016 at 9:02 PM
A few words, lots of meaning, thank you for participating in this contest...congrats on your third place win :)
A  Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 5:30 PM
WOW, amazing imagery...talk about the warmth of light... **SKAT**
Dietrich Avatar
December 12, 2015 at 7:57 PM
utterly gorgeous!!
May Avatar
December 12, 2015 at 2:16 PM
Great write with great imagery David...nicely done
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