Echoes From the Other Side

In my dreams you sang to me,
while hidden in the mist...
As I knelt upon your grave,
with flowers in my fist.
I felt your spirit close to mine,
like memories that I keep...
Is it easier to sing to me
while I am fast asleep?
How tangible these dreams of mine,
yet also quite surreal...
Do these echoes from the other side
have something to reveal?
 
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Date: 4/27/2014 11:05:00 PM
Wow! (hugs) Well deserved first place.
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Date: 4/28/2014 7:04:00 AM
Thank you. Glad you enjoyed my poem.
Date: 4/27/2014 10:52:00 PM
Congratulations on the fine win with this lovely write, Cole
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Cole Banner
Date: 4/28/2014 7:05:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 4/27/2014 6:26:00 PM
Very nicely done and touching words. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Cole Banner
Date: 4/27/2014 9:44:00 PM
Thank you Joyce... Glad you liked it.
Date: 4/27/2014 1:45:00 PM
Hello Cole, love this #1 poem.. Kind of gave me goosebumps, I know these echoes you speak of.. , Congratulations, by the way I posted a fun blog for all my winning poems. Stop by and enjoy IF YOU LIKE. Just in case you don't know which blog belongs to this particular contest. Here's the link, http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=22228&PoetID=18720 Drop by and leave a smile. Hugs ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/27/2014 3:00:00 PM
yeah... :)
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Cole Banner
Date: 4/27/2014 2:39:00 PM
Thanks Linda...
Date: 4/27/2014 12:19:00 PM
Cole, this is a beautiful poem... Congratulations on winning in PD's contest any poem #25... Verlena
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Cole Banner
Date: 4/27/2014 2:39:00 PM
Thank you much...
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