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Abrupt change Wet rain pours; Misty landscape scene ~~~~~~~~~ Roadside kerb Walkway water puddles; Splash of speeding cars ~~~~~~~~~ Wet window panes A thousand droplets; Random pattern ~~~~~~~~~ Umbrella parade Wetness everywhere; Rush for cover ~~~~~~~~~ Jagged lightning Electric sizzle; Trees uprooted ~~~~~~~~~ Massive traffic jam Old giant tree falls; Two road lanes blocked ~~~~~~~~~ Little people drenched Colourful raincoats; Cutesy parasols ~~~~~~~~~ Wetness soaks Wet shoes busy; Rainy commotions ~~~~~~~~~ Touch of flu bout Sniffles and cough; Sore throat lingers ~~~~~~~~~ Drowsy dizzy feel Flu hits the roof; Bedside manners rest ~~~~~~~~~ Blur sensations Mind groggy here; Too much medication ~~~~~~~~~ Rainy day people Stay indoors; Wetness hurls cold ~~~~~~~~~ Bronchial nuisance Coughing bout chokes; Heavy breathing hiss ~~~~~~~~~ Leon Enriquez 25 November 2015 Singapore

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Date: 11/25/2015 6:24:00 PM
A marvelous string of haiku BUT can you do sunshine next Leon ... I need sunshine in my life not this dull greyness we have lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Leon Enriquez
Date: 11/25/2015 8:15:00 PM
Dear Jan: Thank you for your comments. Sure, I will write something more "sunshiny" the next time. Take a look at the pieces titled "Haiku Discrete" written in four parts. You may find these more cheery. :) Leon.

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