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I hear the baby laughing loud and clear, She’s in the next room so very near, I look to see that little face, But there’s no baby in this place. I hear her crying as she skinned her knee, Running to get help from me, I start to say it will be ok, don’t cry, But since that scrape many years have gone by. I hear happy giggles of her first date, She is worried that he will be late, I turn to give her a warm embrace, But she is gone, I am alone in this place. I hear her tell me she is ready to go, It’s time to go to the church Daddy, don’t you know, I grab my keys and head for the door, Then I realize that she’s not here anymore. I hear the baby laughing loud and clear, She’s in the next room so very near, Running to be lifted into my arms, Safe and secure away from all harm. Is this another one of my cruel dreams? Is this laughter as real as it seems? She’s in my arms as real as can be, It’s my grand daughter visiting me!

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Date: 4/20/2020 9:16:00 PM
Love how you so elegantly take your reader on a journey. Awesome.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 4/21/2020 2:11:00 PM
Thank u Miss line
Date: 3/24/2019 1:25:00 PM
What a beautiful, loving poem Timothy! Blessings to you. Susan
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 3/24/2019 5:04:00 PM
Thank you Susan
Date: 3/21/2019 7:44:00 PM
A lovely and relatable poem :). Congratulations!
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 3/21/2019 8:30:00 PM
Thank you PS
Date: 3/21/2019 7:01:00 PM
Timothy, what a wonderful reveal in the last stanza! Congratulations on your win on Mile 25 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest. Only 2 contests to go before the final! ~Mark
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 3/21/2019 8:29:00 PM
Thank you Mark, you are doing a good job too!
Date: 7/7/2018 10:24:00 AM
Adorable. A FAVE for me. So much love in this amazing poem, Timothy.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 3/21/2019 8:35:00 PM
Miss Line, this poem is about my daughter and granddaughter, written directly from my heart. I love those girls more than life itself. I miss my little girl and embrace the new little girl in my life. I didn't really understand true love until I met them.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 3/21/2019 8:29:00 PM
Thank you Miss Line :) <3
Date: 4/20/2018 7:05:00 AM
I have chills! Sad and beautiful. Recent loss? A great tribute... <3
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 4/20/2018 11:01:00 AM
Thank you. No loss of life but the loss of my liitle girl who is 40 now. How I miss when she was little. My granddaughter is bringing back those memories.

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