Echoes

I hear the baby laughing loud and clear,
She’s in the next room so very near,
I look to see that little face,
But there’s no baby in this place.

I hear her crying as she skinned her knee,
Running to get help from me,
I start to say it will be ok, don’t cry,
But since that scrape many years have gone by.

I hear happy giggles of her first date,
She is worried that he will be late,
I turn to give her a warm embrace,
But she is gone, I am alone in this place.

I hear her tell me she is ready to go,
It’s time to go to the church Daddy, don’t you know,
I grab my keys and head for the door,
Then I realize that she’s not here anymore.

I hear the baby laughing loud and clear,
She’s in the next room so very near,
Running to be lifted into my arms,
Safe and secure away from all harm.

Is this another one of my cruel dreams?
Is this laughter as real as it seems?
She’s in my arms as real as can be,
It’s my grand daughter visiting me!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
April 20, 2020 at 9:16 PM
Love how you so elegantly take your reader on a journey. Awesome.
Mcguire Avatar
April 21, 2020 at 2:11 PM
Thank u Miss line
Jeavons Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 1:25 PM
What a beautiful, loving poem Timothy! Blessings to you. Susan
Mcguire Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 5:04 PM
Thank you Susan
Awtry Avatar
March 21, 2019 at 7:44 PM
A lovely and relatable poem :). Congratulations!
Mcguire Avatar
March 21, 2019 at 8:30 PM
Thank you PS
Toney Avatar
March 21, 2019 at 7:01 PM
Timothy, what a wonderful reveal in the last stanza! Congratulations on your win on Mile 25 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest. Only 2 contests to go before the final! ~Mark
Mcguire Avatar
March 21, 2019 at 8:29 PM
Thank you Mark, you are doing a good job too!
Gauthier Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 10:24 AM
Adorable. A FAVE for me. So much love in this amazing poem, Timothy.
Mcguire Avatar
March 21, 2019 at 8:35 PM
Miss Line, this poem is about my daughter and granddaughter, written directly from my heart. I love those girls more than life itself. I miss my little girl and embrace the new little girl in my life. I didn't really understand true love until I met them.
Mcguire Avatar
March 21, 2019 at 8:29 PM
Thank you Miss Line :) <3
Rodrigues Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 7:05 AM
I have chills! Sad and beautiful. Recent loss? A great tribute... <3
Mcguire Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 11:01 AM
Thank you. No loss of life but the loss of my liitle girl who is 40 now. How I miss when she was little. My granddaughter is bringing back those memories.
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