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Date written: 10/01/2016

Echo Chasing


You cling to the wilderness 
and plains like a shy ghost
Where could you possibly be? 
Are you near or far? 

I can hear you, faintly, 
like beads of water 
slowly dripping out of a faucet, 
but can never quite reach you.

Why so elusive? Must you always 
play hide and seek? 
Or could you be somewhere 
in nature, trapped?

I've actively searched for you 
in empty rooms 
And out in fields 
I sometimes walk among.

Yesterday, I came 
repeatedly clapping my hands,
And you clapped back 
to me each time.

Today, I did the same; 
thunderous silence!
Are you buried in the dirt 
unable to make a sound?

I've tenaciously tracked you 
through back countries
choked with fog, only to end up 
in the middle of nowhere.

Has anyone ever found you 
out there in the wild? 
Maybe, just maybe, you're so lost 
you'll never be found.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Empress Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 11:36 AM
Wow so intriguing and creative EI! I am in absolute awe reading this, this is one of those poems you get totally hooked on from the very first line till the end, and the questioning definitely is very engaging. Pleasure reading this. Congratulations on getting this published too. Well deserved
Ibeh Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 1:46 PM
Thank you very much, Inky: -) I really appreciate your awesome feedback and visit.
Mcintosh Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 7:52 AM
Wonderful writing... a echo, humm? Love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina
Ibeh Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 7:59 AM
Thank you very much, Regina:-)
One Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 6:15 AM
Edwards this is an amazing poem.. love the echo vibrations in this one.. great choice for the contest.. Congratulations on having your poem showcased..
Ibeh Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 7:48 AM
Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback and my placement, SO:-) Most obliged.
Kendrick Avatar
March 5, 2022 at 4:07 AM
Your winner in Brian's contest was creative and expressive. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
Ibeh Avatar
March 5, 2022 at 9:33 PM
Thank you very much for the feedback and visit, Sara:-)
Gauthier Avatar
February 11, 2021 at 1:37 PM
A pleasure to find your delightful poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology, Edward ~
Ibeh Avatar
February 11, 2021 at 2:27 PM
One of the best poems I've ever written and so special to me. I appreciate you visiting it yet again, Line:-)
Gauthier Avatar
September 23, 2018 at 11:19 PM
Lovely, Edward. I love the depth of this beautiful poem. Congrats on your win.
Ibeh Avatar
September 24, 2018 at 11:45 AM
Thank you, Line!:-)
Messina Avatar
September 22, 2018 at 11:21 AM
I love this one, Edward. Congrats on your win in the contest.
Ibeh Avatar
September 22, 2018 at 4:01 PM
Thank you very much, Charles!:-) Much love...
Moorman Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 6:50 PM
Edward, I marvel at the manner in which you weave words to tell a story that keeps the reader mesmerized. Wonderful poem, my friend! Congrats on a well deserved win in a somewhat difficult contest.
Ibeh Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 7:44 PM
Thank you, Curtis!:-) I greatly appreciate your visit and wonderful comments.
Gauthier Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 3:48 PM
Lovely, Edward. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Ibeh Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 9:05 PM
Thank you so much, Line!
Gentry Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 9:23 AM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
Ibeh Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 4:22 PM
Thank you very much, Susan!:-)
Haight Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 3:27 PM
Such a lovely poem, Edward. I love the way you used the allegories to express 'elusive love.' Congratulations on your win in the contest. Sandra
Ibeh Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 4:39 PM
Thank you so much, Sandra!:-)
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