Echo a Desperate Plea

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Constance La France Contest, 6/12/2025

In the ebonic afterglow, I hope for your return… —by poet Echo a Desperate Plea Anxious calling across a mountain ravine. Breathless in frigid heights, plummeting d Callousness of the deaf-defying beast. e Desperate to penetrate distance; pinpoint. g Echo of eeriness returns to me thrice. r e e s.

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 6/15/2025 6:34:00 AM

Hey Kim Love "Callousness of the deaf-defying beast." Nice presentation, too! Congratulations! :)

Krishnanand Guptar

Date: 6/15/2025 3:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your win poet friend in this contest with an intelligent take and form. Wish you a cheerful weekend.

Paige Hind

Date: 6/12/2025 7:15:00 PM

Very eerie, but the longing itself is eerie- or so it seems, is anything what it seems? - getting all this from your poem

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/12/2025 7:37:00 PM

The reader sees, what the reader sees :)

Hiya Sharma

Date: 6/12/2025 7:32:00 AM

This is very spine-chilling with its eerie and melancholic vibes! The dark and mysterious imagery you've so meticulously woven here that depicts such profound and deep emotions, dear Kim. Wonderful wordsmithery throughout as well! Brilliantly done! Sending you light and best wishes always ~

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/12/2025 1:13:00 PM

I appreciate you, Hiya! Thank you!