Heidi Sands Poet Free verse

Echo

The trees are bare, but the mountains are golden
In this early morning sunrise, someone captured on video
While some are sleeping, still caught in the night
Such perfect moments pass us by, out of sight
Frozen snow with crunching footsteps break silence 
Maybe, the echo will travel the hills and wake you
Or just maybe, your dreams will rise with the sun

Heidi Sands

2/21/24

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Joseph May February 27, 2024 at 5:48 PM Capturing beautiful moments in nature, Wonderful write Heidi, hugs Heidi Sands February 28, 2024 at 11:03 AM Thank you Joseph. I appreciate your kind comment . Hugs :)

Sotto Poet February 27, 2024 at 11:13 AM Heidi, your poem is a masterpiece filled with creativity, brilliance, and splendor reminiscent of the golden mountains. Your words inspire and bring joy to those who read them. The imagery of frozen snow and footsteps breaking the silence evokes a sense of awakening and beauty that is truly captivating. Another fave Heidi Sands February 27, 2024 at 11:43 AM That is so nice of you to say . Thank you very much! I am happy you consider this a Fave too and I am grateful for your support. It means a lot to me :)

Joe Maverick February 23, 2024 at 12:14 PM You juxtaposition scenes, thought and Possibilty's really well here Heidi, great Contrast and insights..' Er hindsight..? Foresight..? Forsooth..Oh strewth..' Heidi Sands February 23, 2024 at 12:44 PM It is great to see your comment on this Joe. Thank you for taking the time to point out these things. I hope your day is going well :)

Jerry Brotherton February 21, 2024 at 5:47 PM 'Such perfect moments pass us by out of sight'. Sometimes those perfect moments pass by because we choose not to see them. A lovely poem, my friend. Heidi Sands February 23, 2024 at 12:45 PM Hi Jerry. You are right. Thank you for your comment on this :)

Vijay Pandit February 21, 2024 at 12:28 PM Echo of splendor from the golden mountains, my friend. A FAVE for the inspiration and ebullience of your poem, Heidi.--Frozen snow with crunching footsteps break silence Maybe, the echo will travel the hills and wake you Or just maybe, your dreams will rise with the sun--awesome! Heidi Sands February 21, 2024 at 12:43 PM Thank you so much Vijay . It is nice to see your kind feedback. I am grateful for the Fave too. I hope you have a nice evening :)

Silent One February 21, 2024 at 11:13 AM Such vivid imagery dear Heidi.. You expressed this one in great deal... Heidi Sands February 21, 2024 at 11:22 AM Thank you Silent One. It is nice to see you here. I hope you have a beautiful day :)

Paula Goldsmith February 21, 2024 at 10:16 AM I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Echo" write. Have a blessed day writing away............ Heidi Sands February 21, 2024 at 11:02 AM Thank you Paula! I am happy you enjoyed it :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers February 21, 2024 at 8:35 AM Dear Heidi, Your poem beautifully captures the fleeting moments of dawn, vividly depicting nature's quiet majesty. The imagery of bare trees against golden mountains evokes a serene beauty, while the idea of perfect moments passing us is lovely. Your words transport me, the reader, to that frozen landscape, where even footsteps break the silence. The wonderful magic of morning. - Blessings, Daniel Heidi Sands February 21, 2024 at 8:53 AM Hi Daniel . Thank you very much for your positive feedback and taking the time to share . I hope all is well. Have a nice day :)