Echo

The trees are bare, but the mountains are golden In this early morning sunrise, someone captured on video While some are sleeping, still caught in the night Such perfect moments pass us by, out of sight Frozen snow with crunching footsteps break silence Maybe, the echo will travel the hills and wake you Or just maybe, your dreams will rise with the sun Heidi Sands 2/21/24 (C)opyright

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Joseph May

Date: 2/27/2024 5:48:00 PM

Capturing beautiful moments in nature, Wonderful write Heidi, hugs

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/28/2024 11:03:00 AM

Thank you Joseph. I appreciate your kind comment . Hugs :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/27/2024 11:13:00 AM

Heidi, your poem is a masterpiece filled with creativity, brilliance, and splendor reminiscent of the golden mountains. Your words inspire and bring joy to those who read them. The imagery of frozen snow and footsteps breaking the silence evokes a sense of awakening and beauty that is truly captivating. Another fave

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/27/2024 11:43:00 AM

That is so nice of you to say . Thank you very much! I am happy you consider this a Fave too and I am grateful for your support. It means a lot to me :)

Joe Maverick

Date: 2/23/2024 12:14:00 PM

You juxtaposition scenes, thought and Possibilty's really well here Heidi, great Contrast and insights..' Er hindsight..? Foresight..? Forsooth..Oh strewth..'

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/23/2024 12:44:00 PM

It is great to see your comment on this Joe. Thank you for taking the time to point out these things. I hope your day is going well :)

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 2/21/2024 5:47:00 PM

'Such perfect moments pass us by out of sight'. Sometimes those perfect moments pass by because we choose not to see them. A lovely poem, my friend.

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/23/2024 12:45:00 PM

Hi Jerry. You are right. Thank you for your comment on this :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/21/2024 12:28:00 PM

Echo of splendor from the golden mountains, my friend. A FAVE for the inspiration and ebullience of your poem, Heidi.--Frozen snow with crunching footsteps break silence Maybe, the echo will travel the hills and wake you Or just maybe, your dreams will rise with the sun--awesome!

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/21/2024 12:43:00 PM

Thank you so much Vijay . It is nice to see your kind feedback. I am grateful for the Fave too. I hope you have a nice evening :)

Silent One

Date: 2/21/2024 11:13:00 AM

Such vivid imagery dear Heidi.. You expressed this one in great deal...

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/21/2024 11:22:00 AM

Thank you Silent One. It is nice to see you here. I hope you have a beautiful day :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/21/2024 10:16:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Echo" write. Have a blessed day writing away............

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/21/2024 11:02:00 AM

Thank you Paula! I am happy you enjoyed it :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/21/2024 8:35:00 AM

Dear Heidi, Your poem beautifully captures the fleeting moments of dawn, vividly depicting nature's quiet majesty. The imagery of bare trees against golden mountains evokes a serene beauty, while the idea of perfect moments passing us is lovely. Your words transport me, the reader, to that frozen landscape, where even footsteps break the silence. The wonderful magic of morning. - Blessings, Daniel

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/21/2024 8:53:00 AM

Hi Daniel . Thank you very much for your positive feedback and taking the time to share . I hope all is well. Have a nice day :)