Echo

from the depth of your heart my pulse beats back Tien form

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/1/2020 5:16:00 PM

Truly poetic!

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/1/2020 8:03:00 PM

Thank you :) hugs

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/1/2020 11:01:00 AM

Happened to 'see' this one a second time, and found in it what I believe to be a bit of the macabre, Edgar Alan Poe-like even. (Unintentional?). It works quite well too! Happiness and Joy, Gershon

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/1/2020 11:12:00 AM

Unintentional certainly ... just a thought that popped in my head ... thank you :) happy new year

FJ Thomas

Date: 1/1/2020 9:36:00 AM

Powerfully succinct Sandra. And perfect in it's beauty.

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/1/2020 9:51:00 AM

Thank you so much FJ.... Happy New Year... hugs :)

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 1/1/2020 7:10:00 AM

Prosaic nature ...

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/1/2020 8:42:00 AM

Thank you Kai... Happy New Year to you... hugs and blessings :)

Chris Green

Date: 12/30/2019 7:54:00 AM

Simply beautiful my friend. One line, so much desire portrayed. Loved this one.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/30/2019 11:20:00 AM

thank you so much my friend.... hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/30/2019 6:00:00 AM

The echo of love amplified! So romantic dearest, Sandra! Hugs xxx

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/30/2019 6:33:00 AM

Thank you so much Demetrios...my muse goes from sad to romance in seconds... i never know what she will pen next :) hugs

Bobby May

Date: 12/30/2019 5:11:00 AM

Love this one Sis!

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/30/2019 6:32:00 AM

Thank you so much Bro.... it was a fun little write :) hugs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/30/2019 4:37:00 AM

Two hearts beating as one, never heard of this form. Happy New year Sandra, hope everything good comes your way. Tom

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/30/2019 5:07:00 AM

Thank you Tom... Brian adds contests in the blogs with some unique forms...i don't always have time to try them all but try them when i can...i like learning new forms of poetry :) Happy New Year to you my friend... hugs

Jeff Connelly

Date: 12/29/2019 11:31:00 PM

In its simplicity Sandra it says so much. Much adored. Thank you.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/30/2019 5:05:00 AM

Thank you so much Jeff :)

Juliet Ligon

Date: 12/29/2019 10:39:00 PM

Sounds like a fun form to try. I love the depth of yours.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/30/2019 5:03:00 AM

on the blogs, Brian always has unique forms to try...i don't always have time to try them all but like to attempt them when i can.... Thank you Juliet... hugs

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/29/2019 8:52:00 PM

Don't know what 'tien' s, but your version sure is hard to beat!! ~ Hearts-a-pulsating

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/29/2019 8:56:00 PM

it's on Brian Strand's blog...it's a poem consisting of 10 one syllable words... thank you my friend... hugs