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Your tongue suspiciously spoke of constellations, an unlicked sky gripping secrets nonetheless, that mouth spat it's majesty without ever stirring the air proving no white stardust really adorns your tongue

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 5/7/2017 8:14:00 PM
Yes, nicely done! On my top 5 Rictameter for sure!!
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Date: 8/26/2008 11:01:00 AM
This one is a tricky wee beastie, with so much elusive meaning evoking wild thoughts... I like it very much!
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