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Ebony Shadows

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Yalto
Invented by Edward Ibeh: line 1 to 15:  3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5, no rhyme required.

Evenfall welcomes twilight, whereas a sanguine sun slowly starts setting, coloring blue skies and white clouds blood red or cotton candy pink, as its dying rays begrudgingly give way to ebony shadows. (Yalto) 05/17/2020

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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 5/22/2020 7:30:00 AM
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I had no idea how to approach this form and to be honest thought the whole thing rather pretentious. But you mastered it and made it into something wonderful.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/22/2020 9:25:00 AM
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Thank you so much D.W., your comments have brought a smile to my day, stay safe my friend, Emile.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 5/18/2020 1:38:00 PM
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This is so lovely and paints a gorgeous picture. congratulations on your top marks.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/18/2020 3:30:00 PM
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Thanks Jeanne, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/17/2020 9:22:00 AM
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At twilight I can picture the blue skies and cotton clouds while I read your beautiful words Emile :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/17/2020 11:03:00 AM
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Thank you Aditi, I appreciate your kind comments my friend, Emile.

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