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Ebony Shadows

Evenfall
       welcomes twilight,
           whereas
              a sanguine sun
                 slowly starts setting;
                  coloring
                   blue skies
                   and white clouds,
                  blood red,
                 or cotton
               candy pink,
            as its dying rays
          begrudgingly give way
        to
ebony shadows.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 5/22/2020 7:30:00 AM
I had no idea how to approach this form and to be honest thought the whole thing rather pretentious. But you mastered it and made it into something wonderful.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/22/2020 9:25:00 AM
Thank you so much D.W., your comments have brought a smile to my day, stay safe my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/18/2020 1:38:00 PM
This is so lovely and paints a gorgeous picture. congratulations on your top marks.
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Date: 5/18/2020 3:30:00 PM
Thanks Jeanne, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/17/2020 9:22:00 AM
At twilight I can picture the blue skies and cotton clouds while I read your beautiful words Emile :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/17/2020 11:03:00 AM
Thank you Aditi, I appreciate your kind comments my friend, Emile.

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