Silent One Poet Verse

Ebony and Ivory

Lost amongst a trillion stars.
In lustrous shades of Ebony and Ivory.
We are like the moon craving for night fall,
so our twin embers can ignite dark skies.
Under the modesty of moonlight,
desire illuminates in our eyes.
We spark like supernovas in empyrean explosions,
waltzing around the planets in a cosmic ballet.
Penetrating pulses beat until glimpse of daylight,
as zealous sun ascends like bonfires in our hearts -
A celestial tapestry woven in timeless space.

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Regina Elliott December 16, 2023 at 3:42 PM Such beauty in your universal poetry, Silent One. So well crafted with ethereal verse. All the best to you. ~

Paige Hind December 16, 2023 at 11:11 AM A very deep and celestial piece! Enjoyed it a lot!

Hiya Sharma December 16, 2023 at 6:21 AM Oh my, this is such an eclectic poem with such vibrantly glorious hues of cosmic musings and these descriptions are absolutely breathtaking! The alliteration, fascinating wordplay, imageries and evocative depth.. Ah, everything surrounds the aura of this poem so well! "Lost amongst a trillion stars" That's magical! "We are like the moon", "zealous sun ascends like bonfires in our hearts" Many artistic lines here, so vividly crafted with such gorgeous words. Ah, absolutely enjoyed reading this :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler December 15, 2023 at 6:58 PM A masterpiece that sparkles with beauty. This is in my faves. Thank you for sharing.

Eve Roper December 15, 2023 at 6:22 PM Beautiful poem. "Like bonfires in our hearts", is such a warm feeling. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem. May you and your family have a Merry Christmas & a Happy New Year. Hugs my friend.

Abdullah Alhemaidy December 15, 2023 at 2:30 PM Wonderful sweet reading!

Sotto Poet December 15, 2023 at 2:04 PM You have captured the essence of a truly exquisite poem, my dear friend. Your exceptional talent continues to astound me with every new piece you create. This particular work is a marvel, displaying impeccable harmony, seamless flow, and vivid imagery. It is a magnificent accomplishment, resonating deeply within the spirit. A fave

Jerry Brotherton December 15, 2023 at 1:52 PM Magnificently done my friend. Your talent amazes me with each new poem.

Sara Kendrick December 15, 2023 at 12:12 PM Yes, just one drop in a very large bucket are we. I like the way it put the idea to pen. Thank you for sharing your work with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Jim Slaughter December 15, 2023 at 10:43 AM Exquisite imagery, S O. I love "the modesty of moonlight".

Frank Sheehan December 15, 2023 at 10:32 AM Wonderful piece. Great rhythm, flow and imagery. Fantastic work.

Ink Empress December 15, 2023 at 8:43 AM Wow this is such an ethereal and cosmically moving write. I love the title too ebony and ivory and the celestial wordplay that truly depicts a soulful connection in such eloquence, i love especially the lines “ We spark like supernovas in cosmic explosions,“ exquisite! “ We are like the moon craving for night fall” very creative line! “ A celestial tapestry woven in timeless space.“ brilliant! A very mellifluous and heartfelt write i felt so deeply: i can never get tired of reading your poems.