Ebonification Education

Some sez m a loss caz, I contain ta many flaz
Just becaz m not subjec to ya lawz.

Lizen t ma speech, m hear ta preach 
Ma wordz, well byond ya reach
Wot ya hearan iz more than a screech
U tink ya to impotant ta learn wat I teach

Wizdom byond the gatz o ya mind
I iz preachn to da dumb n blind
Pearlz to swine, insted on slop ya dined
I keep movin foward ya left bahind

U trip ova words in purfect oda
Mine aint purfect I liv beyond ya borda
Not subject ta ya stupid odaz
I dance along ma own coridorz

So step back, dis iz ma time
I blast ya wit ma ryme
I aint lispin m doin dubba time
Drink ma down m smoooth like wine

Ya take ya shot, ya tink ya cool
Betta not ta speak, n reveal yar fool
Ya wrdz in a puddle a stagnate pool
Comn off ya face a string a drool

M gone in a flash ya cuud not seize
I mo powerful then a breeze
Leaven ya ta do az ya pleaze
Ya coudnt seize da forest through da treeze

Verlena's Ebonics Contest. 

For my friend Freddie

Some say I'm a lost cause, I contain to many flaws
Just because I'm not suject to your laws

Listen to my speach, I am here to preach
My words are well beyond your reach
What you are hearing is more than a screech
You think you're too important to learn what I teach

Wisdom beyond the gates of your mind
I am preaching to the dumb and blind
Pearls to swine, instead on slop you dined
I keep moving forward you're left behind

You trip over words in perfect order
mine aren't perfect, I live beyond your borders
Not subject to your stupid orders
I dance along my own corridors

So step back, this is my time
I blast you with my rhyme
I'm not lisping I'm doing double time
Drink me down I'm smooth like wine

You take your shot, you think your cool
Better not to speak and reveal you're a fool
Your words in a puddle a stagnant pool
Coming off of your face in a string of drool

I'm gone in a flash you could not seize
I am more powerful than a breeze
Leaving you to do as you please
You couldn't see the forest through the trees
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Hicks Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 11:32 AM
It's always good to try new things and I was pleasantly surprised to see you try your hand at rap. The first version - though a bit harder to understand - is more true to the world of rap. I'm not lisping I'm doing double time << that's the spirit! Lol...
Lamoureux Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 1:30 PM
Thanks Timothy.
Mehta Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 10:39 PM
Original piece is more enjoyable than the translation, Richard. Congrats
Lawless Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 10:24 PM
Hey Richard thanks for the translation and congrats on the win.
Sietesantos Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 1:37 PM
Congratulations on a well-deserved placement in this contest, Richard! Enjoyed reading this fun piece that you so excellently penned! Pandita
Allison Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 1:06 PM
Am grateful for the translation Richard! A fine win:-) Hugs Jan xx
Walker  Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 12:42 PM
Well done for the contest Rick... Congratulations on such high marks... Verlena
Lamoureux Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 12:35 AM
Thanks Verlena, it was a blast to write this one.
A. Sharma Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 11:10 AM
Superb write Richard! Congrats on a fantastic winning masterpiece!
Gibson Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 2:23 PM
This is fantastic...haven't even thought about this one.
Jones Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 6:15 PM
Every body has already said it!!! Outstanding job Richard....good luck.....bet it does great...:-)
Dietrich Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 5:25 PM
Richard, you did GREAT with this challenge. I have something up my sleeve, if I ever get around to it!!!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 6:56 PM
Thanks, I'm looking forward to what you come up with.
Bordner Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 8:53 PM
Ah, to be a Sovereign individual, unowned, uncondoned. Fascinating personality and rebelliousness in this poem Richard...J.A.B.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 10:06 PM
Thanks Justin, I very much enjoy your comments.
Smith Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 4:03 PM
Rappin Richard! Who'd u thunk it?!?... Love it, my friend! Gl in the contest.. Hugs.. Arlene
Lamoureux Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 9:20 AM
Thanks Arlene, this was a fun one.
Sirak Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 8:11 AM
Awesome job with this one. Rhythmic and so much fun to read. I bet spell check drove you crazy!
Lamoureux Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 9:37 AM
Yes it did *lol*
Lindley Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 11:03 PM
You , my friend , did a great job with this hard to write form. I am now going to tackle this for the fun of it. A great idea Verlena came up with this one...
Lamoureux Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 12:59 AM
Thanks Robert, I had fun with this one.
Bear Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 7:42 PM
Where is my son? What have you done with him? Is there a ransom demand? Don't think you will get any credit for your spellings on this one Do hope you win!!! Love Mom
Lamoureux Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 8:05 PM
Not much ya can do ta help me wit dis wun. Thanks moms luv ya!
Dietrich Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 6:04 PM
a very fun one to read. GREAT job with this!!
Lamoureux Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 7:02 PM
Thanks Andrea.
Smith Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 1:00 PM
My mind is changing the words back as I read them....lol...love the message
Lamoureux Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 1:16 PM
Tanks dis was a blast ta write, coulda gone all nite, gotta ma apple tooka da bite. Ps thanks for the word change suggestion, I changed it and modified a few more in the process.
Manassian Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 12:14 PM
Richard....this is...so....different. It's a really hard contest to write for. Wish you good luck. Like the self confidence the narrator exudes. Oh...got a blog up. You told me to let you know! Hugs
Manassian Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 1:20 PM
Have fun, my dear. Let me live vicariously through you! ;) Summer vacation is a LONG way off for me.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 1:18 PM
Hi Eileen, I am heading out soon so will check it out a bit later. I always enjoy your blogs.
Nance Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 9:56 AM
Wow that was a trip through the rabbit hole. I could not even picture you talkin' like that, that would trip me out, lol. great job, this contest geeks me out I can't wait to post mine! :) hugs sweets
Nance Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 1:26 PM
Lol that is funny you are too white for that! (I say that lovingly) but its not M&M its eminem! haha. thats hillarious, oh man, I got mine up its called Dig it baby, its lyrics
Lamoureux Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 1:21 PM
Let me know when you post it. It's fun to take on a different persona. My wife liked the poem but thought I was way to white when I read it *lol* she suggested I send it to M & M.
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