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Ebb of Life - Earth Element

Since a small child, I have been one with Earth, Green winding tendrils have captured my very heart; I would follow my father with innocent mirth, A love for nature and earth was my start. And into the deep, earthy green we would journey, I still hike forests and feel the connection; Meandering I caress the green, mossy and ferny, I often drop to my knees for a better inspection. Fallen leaves and flora of the forest decay, Feeding the soil and make it strong and fertile; Wildflowers grow reaching and I gather a bouquet, And hidden in the undergrowth is a turtle. All in life depends on the earth and its health, We must all protect what we have for the future; It is more important than possessions or wealth, Into the green I go for tranquility to capture. _________________________ March 8, 2016 Poetry/Rhyme/Ebb of Life - Earth Element Copyright Protected, ID 16-765-177-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Elements Part 1: Earth sponsor, Brian Davey Fourth Place
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March 20, 2016 at 11:36 PM
I love the picture above Broken, congratulations on your "Elements Of Earth win." LINDA
La France Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 2:26 PM
Linda, thanks so much for the congratulations and the compliment !
Raven Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 3:36 PM
Hi Constance, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. What beauty you do place before us. A circle of life for all living things. Born of the earth to finally feed the earth once more. Your work always has such a wonderful flow to it and the words always fit each theme perfectly. I did so enjoy this read. It has to be a seven from me and it definitely goes into my faves....Vlad.
La France Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 3:48 PM
Vlad, thanks for the great comment and the seven and fav, appreciate 1
Inman Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 8:40 AM
Turned out beautifully, BW, serene, pensive and beautiful.
La France Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 5:41 PM
James, thanks so much for visiting with the lovely comment ~
Cheema Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 8:25 AM
Congrats Constance! A very natural flow!
La France Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 5:45 PM
Balveen, thanks so much for visiting with the congrats !
Leiser Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 11:37 PM
Congrats on your win, Broken Wings :)
La France Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 2:07 AM
Laura, thanks for visiting with the congrats !
A. Sharma Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 11:02 PM
Brilliant take on theme n wonderful win Broken.... big congrats!
La France Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 2:24 AM
Upma, thanks for visiting with the brilliant, wonderful and congrats !
Scars Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 9:45 PM
BW, wonderful poem and great take on the contest.. congrats on your placement in the contest!! -luloo :)
La France Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 2:25 AM
Laura, thanks for visiting with the wonderful and the congrats :)
Warrior Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 9:17 PM
Congrats on the Win of the Earth...Well done Wings...^WW^
La France Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 2:25 AM
Winged, thanks for the congrats and the compliment !
Davey Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 7:42 PM
Congratulations on a well deserving poem and thank you for entering
La France Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 2:30 AM
Brian, thanks for a great theme and for my wonderful placement, I am honored !
Ashe Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 6:39 PM
I will be back!!!! :-)
La France Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 7:59 PM
Thanks Walter ...
Roper Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 2:18 PM
I like it so far :-)
La France Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 7:59 PM
Thank you Eve . . .
Mcconnell Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 11:53 AM
Nicely penned Constance, you've written this really well, liked it!
La France Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 12:14 PM
Gordon, thanks for visiting with the compliment, it is not quite finished but I like where it is going ...
Rv Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 11:21 AM
This is so lovely, dear BW!! I was wondering.. For your Second Chance contest, could we enter a poem that got a (low) placement in one contest and an NA in another? :)
La France Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 11:31 AM
Sneha, thanks for visiting with the lovely and yes is the answer to your question. ..
Inman Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 10:45 AM
Still working on my comment, I'll be back later, haha.
La France Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 2:42 AM
James, lol, so funny ~
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