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. Waves Wash 'pon shore Rhythmic Ebb and flow As life's Waves Also Have a rhythm Birth, childhood, teens If granted Adult. Death, Then what Forever Somewhere 'Pon Gold streets Or Hebrews 9:27 King James Version 27 And as it is appointed unto men once to die, but after this the judgment: Date written: 03, 03, 2023 Sponsor: Emile Pinet Contest: Waltz Wave Checked with HowManySyllables and Grammar Checker

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Date: 3/5/2023 9:46:00 AM
HI sara I really liked this poem..' a lot of Relevence within your lines.' Btw how is Doris.?
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Date: 3/5/2023 2:30:00 AM
We keep travelling through the different stages of life to our final destination.... it being still mysterious. Beautifully done Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/5/2023 2:37:00 AM
Valsa, We are all heading to an end. We just don't know the time or place. Thanks for dropping by and taking time to comment. Sara
Date: 3/4/2023 2:03:00 AM
We all have to pass through that stage of life.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/4/2023 3:55:00 AM
Yes, we do, Victor. If only, everyone chose to accept Jesus as the only way. Thanks for stopping by. Sara
Date: 3/3/2023 8:53:00 AM
Lovely Sara! Debx
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/3/2023 10:30:00 AM
Why, thank you, Deb. I appreciate the visit. Sara

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