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Ebb and Flow

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Waves

                Wash 'pon

                         shore
Rhythmic

           Ebb and flow

                     As life's

Waves

       Also

                 Have a rhythm

Birth, childhood, teens

                              If granted

                                      Adult.

Death,

       Then what

                  Forever

Somewhere

            'Pon 

                Gold streets

                                             Or    



Hebrews 9:27

King James Version
27 And as it is appointed unto men once to die, but after this the judgment: 

Date written: 03, 03, 2023
Sponsor: Emile Pinet
Contest: Waltz Wave
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Maverick Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 9:46 AM
HI sara I really liked this poem..' a lot of Relevence within your lines.' Btw how is Doris.?
George Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 2:30 AM
We keep travelling through the different stages of life to our final destination.... it being still mysterious. Beautifully done Sara
Kendrick Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 2:37 AM
Valsa, We are all heading to an end. We just don't know the time or place. Thanks for dropping by and taking time to comment. Sara
Buhagiar Avatar
March 4, 2023 at 2:03 AM
We all have to pass through that stage of life.
Kendrick Avatar
March 4, 2023 at 3:55 AM
Yes, we do, Victor. If only, everyone chose to accept Jesus as the only way. Thanks for stopping by. Sara
M  Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 8:53 AM
Lovely Sara! Debx
Kendrick Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 10:30 AM
Why, thank you, Deb. I appreciate the visit. Sara
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