Jenna Logan Poet Haiku

Ebb and Flow

waves flow to the shore
tide rises
sea shells on the sand


a briny sea
undulates in rhythmic waving motion
slowly ebbing away


October 18, 2021
Lune (Mixed Pair) Contest
Sponsor: William Kekaula

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Sam Kauffman October 29, 2021 at 10:51 AM "Rhythmic waving motion" just one of many vivid images Jenna. Wonderful metaphor for the ebbs and flows of life. Congratulations for your win! Blessings.

Christuraj Alex October 28, 2021 at 10:39 PM Beautiful comparison and linking and analysis. Great work. Congratulations!

Susan Ashley October 28, 2021 at 8:45 PM Dear Jenna, your tides rise and fall on the beauty of your imagery and sensory satisfaction. Congratulations for your excellent win in William’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~ Susan

Ann Peck October 28, 2021 at 12:43 PM One can feel the waves rising and falling throughout your beautiful Lune. Congratulations!

William Kelii Kekaula October 28, 2021 at 8:37 AM Choice articulative words, Jenna, love the consonance that flows my friend, my compliments for your endeavor, and I'm glad for your win, Aloha!

Jan Allison October 28, 2021 at 5:33 AM Dropping back with many congrats on your win Jenna:-) hugs Jan xx

Caren Krutsinger October 22, 2021 at 12:39 AM I enjoy the ebb and flow of this one Jenna. Jenna Logan October 22, 2021 at 7:48 AM Thanks so much for reading me, Caren.

Ann Foster October 21, 2021 at 4:35 PM Truly beautiful. I could feel the sand and smell the sea... God bless... Ann Jenna Logan October 22, 2021 at 7:48 AM What kind remarks you've left for me, Anne. Thank you!

Tom Cunningham October 18, 2021 at 8:32 PM The oceans never cease to facinate me Jenna, you captured them well in your haiku Tom Jenna Logan October 19, 2021 at 5:47 AM Good morning and thanks, Tom. Stay well

Deb M October 18, 2021 at 3:09 PM Beautiful Jenna. Debx Jenna Logan October 18, 2021 at 5:26 PM Hi Deb. Thanks so much.

Andrea Dietrich October 18, 2021 at 1:41 PM this is very lovely, Jenna. It should get a win, I would say!! Jenna Logan October 18, 2021 at 2:00 PM I appreciate the support. Thanks, Andrea.

David Kavanagh October 18, 2021 at 1:08 PM Your ebb and flow is in perfect balance Jenna, to capture such movement and imagery in such syllabic brevity is so difficult to accomplish, I hope your work is rewarded, cheers David Jenna Logan October 18, 2021 at 2:00 PM Your comments always leave me smiling. Thank you for your continued encouragement, David.

Jan Allison October 18, 2021 at 9:28 AM lovely flow from one image to the next:-) hugs Jan xx Jenna Logan October 18, 2021 at 10:47 AM Thanks, Jan, so much.

Christuraj Alex October 18, 2021 at 9:22 AM Very lucky to read your poems. You make simple things complex, and vice versa. Unique! I Love your poems. Jenna Logan October 18, 2021 at 10:46 AM Your comments are so complimentary, Chris. I appreciate them very much.

Victor Buhagiar October 18, 2021 at 8:54 AM Brilliant. The sea has its attractions. Jenna Logan October 18, 2021 at 10:45 AM It does, just as much as the celestial beauties. Thanks,Victor.

Chris Green October 18, 2021 at 8:18 AM Beautiful Jenna. I love this but then I love anything that has to do with the ocean. Best wishes in the contest Jenna Logan October 18, 2021 at 10:44 AM So do I, Chris. Thanks for your good wishes.