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Ebb and Flow

waves flow to the shore tide rises sea shells on the sand a briny sea undulates in rhythmic waving motion slowly ebbing away October 18, 2021 Lune (Mixed Pair) Contest Sponsor: William Kekaula

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/29/2021 10:51:00 AM

"Rhythmic waving motion" just one of many vivid images Jenna. Wonderful metaphor for the ebbs and flows of life. Congratulations for your win! Blessings.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 10/28/2021 10:39:00 PM

Beautiful comparison and linking and analysis. Great work. Congratulations!

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/28/2021 8:45:00 PM

Dear Jenna, your tides rise and fall on the beauty of your imagery and sensory satisfaction. Congratulations for your excellent win in William’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~ Susan

Ann Peck

Date: 10/28/2021 12:43:00 PM

One can feel the waves rising and falling throughout your beautiful Lune. Congratulations!

Hilo Poet

Date: 10/28/2021 8:37:00 AM

Choice articulative words, Jenna, love the consonance that flows my friend, my compliments for your endeavor, and I'm glad for your win, Aloha!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/28/2021 5:33:00 AM

Dropping back with many congrats on your win Jenna:-) hugs Jan xx

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/22/2021 12:39:00 AM

I enjoy the ebb and flow of this one Jenna.

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/22/2021 7:48:00 AM

Thanks so much for reading me, Caren.

Ann Foster

Date: 10/21/2021 4:35:00 PM

Truly beautiful. I could feel the sand and smell the sea... God bless... Ann

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/22/2021 7:48:00 AM

What kind remarks you've left for me, Anne. Thank you!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/18/2021 8:32:00 PM

The oceans never cease to facinate me Jenna, you captured them well in your haiku Tom

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/19/2021 5:47:00 AM

Good morning and thanks, Tom. Stay well

Deb M

Date: 10/18/2021 3:09:00 PM

Beautiful Jenna. Debx

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/18/2021 5:26:00 PM

Hi Deb. Thanks so much.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/18/2021 1:41:00 PM

this is very lovely, Jenna. It should get a win, I would say!!

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/18/2021 2:00:00 PM

I appreciate the support. Thanks, Andrea.

David Kavanagh

Date: 10/18/2021 1:08:00 PM

Your ebb and flow is in perfect balance Jenna, to capture such movement and imagery in such syllabic brevity is so difficult to accomplish, I hope your work is rewarded, cheers David

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/18/2021 2:00:00 PM

Your comments always leave me smiling. Thank you for your continued encouragement, David.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/18/2021 9:28:00 AM

lovely flow from one image to the next:-) hugs Jan xx

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/18/2021 10:47:00 AM

Thanks, Jan, so much.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 10/18/2021 9:22:00 AM

Very lucky to read your poems. You make simple things complex, and vice versa. Unique! I Love your poems.

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/18/2021 10:46:00 AM

Your comments are so complimentary, Chris. I appreciate them very much.