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EAVESDROP listen with eyes closed words drifting in and out of sleep at midnight hour 5/18/2017 Senryu Form

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John Michaels

Date: 5/20/2017 3:25:00 PM

Hi Kim! Can totally relate to those insistent words that encroach when you're meant to be doing something else... but our muses know no such boundaries, so we must welcome their gifts!! Lovely Senryu! Regards, John.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2017 5:32:00 PM

Thank you, John!

Eric Boddie

Date: 5/19/2017 6:02:00 PM

my midnight is quite the same....but there are so many words at war for my brain....thats the reason i find it hard to sleep....just like new jack city, the pen keeps calling me....it keeps calling me....lol....awesomely inspiring haiku kim....;)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/19/2017 6:21:00 PM

Thanks so much, Eric, and I know what ya mean! I start watching tv and constantly pause because a new idea spring forth. Better than watching tv anyway!

Dean Wood

Date: 5/19/2017 12:59:00 PM

Very nice Kim. And when the words get too loud, you have to get up and write them down! I like it! - Dean

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/19/2017 5:02:00 PM

Thank you, Dean! Isn't that the truth :)

Probir Gupta

Date: 5/19/2017 10:43:00 AM

Wonderful eavesdrop ...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/19/2017 5:02:00 PM

Thanks, Probir!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/19/2017 9:47:00 AM

I LIKES it!!! When I was a kid, this was a very favorite activity of mine, feigning sleep in the back of the station wagon while my parents discussed important issues and I was the only kid hearing it!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/19/2017 10:32:00 AM

Oh and drive-in movies that they thought you were sleeping during...yeah, right...lol!

Darren White

Date: 5/19/2017 7:51:00 AM

Haha, I eavesdrop on my own thoughts at night, wonderful inspiration, if I don't forget to jot 'em down, that is.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/19/2017 8:31:00 AM

Thanks, Darren!

Chris Green

Date: 5/19/2017 6:04:00 AM

I have heard those words many nights. Nicely done Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/19/2017 6:05:00 AM

Thank you, Chris! Sometimes I fight for that one poem before I go to sleep :) Blessings, my friend!