Eating Sun Rays

Slurp sunshine
Burp the redefined
Superb ceremonial herbs
Munched on at lunchtime 
Feeling the shaman smoke
Flood the mind
Speaking with feathered rogue serpents
I guess it's due to my
Tweaking lost treasured Mayan bloodline
Streaking stars
And
Screaming hearts
Waiting to be found and aligned and
Intertwined within the art of my rhyme
Reanimated Aztec Frankenstein 
Looking for a bride to be my valentine 
And take a space ride cruise on the
Solar system super highway divine
High on Milky Way juice soy sublime
Tired of being lonely with moonshine
We should do this again sometime

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 1/31/2015 9:31:00 PM
Your imagery is really creative and unique. I checked you out from reading Casarah's tribute to you!
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Date: 1/10/2015 10:43:00 AM
I dig it..streaking stars and screaming hearts!! awesome!
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Sebastian Aaron Baez
Date: 1/10/2015 11:17:00 AM
You know who's awesome? YOU!
Date: 1/10/2015 9:45:00 AM
This is fun, artsy, but not nonsense! Nice flow of inspiration!
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Sebastian Aaron Baez
Date: 1/10/2015 11:16:00 AM
It always seems like nonsense to me! :) Thank you Donna for stopping by and reading my brain!
Date: 1/10/2015 7:22:00 AM
Nice work
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Sebastian Aaron Baez
Date: 1/10/2015 11:14:00 AM
Thank you Joshua for the comment!
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