Eating Shrimps

Eating Shrimps
I eat choc sponge cake.                                                                                                       
They watch me eat it.                                                                                                        
See the TV advert.                                                                                                                
I see the map.                                                                                                                      
I'm in the Taiwan.
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Labyrinth Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 4:22 PM
Abstract. Visions of Christopher Walken barefoot and shackled in Vietnam.
Jimmy Boom Semtex Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 4:27 PM
old poems from 2015 before i had a 3 plus year break from posting. just random posts of my work. thanx
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