Eating Alone

Eating alone puts me in 

a self-conscious mood,

every bite I take every spill I make,

feeling hundreds of eyes staring 

at my attempts to appear as if 

my unaccompanied dining event 

is a once-in-a-while circumstance,

reading the newspaper provides a 

fortress for lonely feelings,

occasionally I peek from behind 

the printed wall and watch other diners 

who share intimate glances,

laughter and coupleness.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Smith Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 12:46 AM
A worthy win Sonia, congratulations...
Walker Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 3:34 PM
Charlie, I appreciate your kindness. Have a restful Sunday.
Negron Flores Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 11:47 PM
Congratulations Sonia on the placement of the contest
Walker Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Nayda, thank you for the placement of my poem within your contest. I appreciate the opportunity of you providing the contest for us. Happy weekend! ~ Sonia
Muideen Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 11:19 AM
What an interesting piece.........A.M.
Walker Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 3:27 PM
Thank you, A.M. for reading my poem. ~ Sonia
Smith Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 10:35 PM
Working the crossword works for me. It gives the appearance that you have no need of friends to entertain yourself. Make sure it's the NY Times Sat. Edition and fill in all the boxes if you know them or not. That'll give them something to talk about...OH YEAH, I LIKED YOUR PIECE, CHARLIE
Walker Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 10:57 PM
Charlie, thanks for your advice about filling in a crossword puzzle, especially the NY Times Saturday Edition when eating solo. That would be a challenging one to do. My twin Brother, Gene does their crosswords in ink. I appreciate your kind comment on my lonely piece. ~ Sonia
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