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Eat Your Soup

Root toot soupeé soup
Hoot hoop hoopeé hoop
Eat your soup
Then hola hoop

Moogoo the foolee new
Did pounder to start a quest

Red green yellow blue
Hoopée hoo hoopée do
Eat your soup
Then hula hoop

The foodo dooble dee do
Went about poundering 
Soopee soup

Not a wink did he sleep
Dooble dee do night and day
Poundering the soopee soup
Fidel Dee de dooble de do

Along came Moogoo
Fidle Dee do 
Eat your soup
Then hula hoop

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The Situation Date: 8/26/2023 10:15:00 AM Looks like a father son collaboration which I commend. Though rhymes usually come from mothers. I commend the dad for getting him to write. Login to Reply Robert James Liguori Date: 8/26/2023 4:23:00 PM It's actually a poem inspired by my brother. He's only 51 and is in a nursing home where he has MS and has lost movement of his legs. I share poems with him from time to time from PoetrySoup. He enjoys them. And occasionally he writes his own verses which I collaborate with him on.