Eat Your Soup

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By Michael Alfred Liguori and Robert James Liguori

Root toot soupeé soup Hoot hoop hoopeé hoop Eat your soup Then hola hoop Moogoo the foolee new Did pounder to start a quest Red green yellow blue Hoopée hoo hoopée do Eat your soup Then hula hoop The foodo dooble dee do Went about poundering Soopee soup Not a wink did he sleep Dooble dee do night and day Poundering the soopee soup Fidel Dee de dooble de do Along came Moogoo Fidle Dee do Eat your soup Then hula hoop

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The Situation

Date: 8/26/2023 10:15:00 AM

Looks like a father son collaboration which I commend. Though rhymes usually come from mothers. I commend the dad for getting him to write.

Robert James Liguori
Date: 8/26/2023 4:23:00 PM

It's actually a poem inspired by my brother. He's only 51 and is in a nursing home where he has MS and has lost movement of his legs. I share poems with him from time to time from PoetrySoup. He enjoys them. And occasionally he writes his own verses which I collaborate with him on.