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I am the cherry
On the cake

I am the damsel in distress
Wanton of affections

I am the woman inside your thoughts
Dancing in harmony to your hearts beating rhyme

I am the lady in black
Whom will mourn at your funeral

I am the one who kisses the fool
After all, tiss I who picked you


Notes: Written from the woman's perspective ( I think )

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/28/2015 9:33:00 PM
Your visuals match your poetry so well I have greatly enjoyed each of your poems I have read thus far, Jill
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Date: 4/30/2015 12:49:00 AM
Thank you Jill, I sure had fun with that!
Date: 3/13/2015 11:05:00 PM
You did a good job on the Lady's perspective. 7
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arthur vaso
Date: 3/13/2015 11:08:00 PM
Thanks Eve
Date: 3/12/2015 8:08:00 PM
I too love the final line - i proposed to my hubby .... say no more lol:-) a 7 from me:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/13/2015 11:07:00 PM
Thanks Jan! Hugs
Date: 3/12/2015 4:04:00 PM
A well structured poem with a emotional release launching it into our hearts. Emile.
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Date: 3/13/2015 11:06:00 PM
Thank you Emile!!!!
Date: 3/10/2015 6:16:00 PM
Interestingly done,Arthur. I especially like the last one!
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arthur vaso
Date: 3/10/2015 8:57:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 3/10/2015 12:10:00 PM
Your perspective is precise, this made me smile. Terrific write Arthur! Hugs
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Date: 3/10/2015 6:14:00 PM
Thank you Cecilia :)
Date: 3/10/2015 11:30:00 AM
It sure is from a womans perspective... being the damsel in distress, the cherry and the one who kisses the fool lol... :)... nice obe Arthur.. nad
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Date: 3/10/2015 6:14:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 3/10/2015 12:14:00 AM
Well-written from the woman's perspective, Arthur, especially that last line. BTW, forgot to thank you for the sweet comment about my son in my avatar...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 3/10/2015 6:13:00 PM
Thanks Rhonda
Date: 3/10/2015 12:04:00 AM
It does sound like a woman's perspective:-) my fav line " I am the woman inside your thoughts Dancing in harmony to your hearts beating rhyme"
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Date: 3/10/2015 6:13:00 PM
Thank you njeri