Arthur Vaso Poet Light Verse

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Eat Me

I am the cherry
On the cake

I am the damsel in distress
Wanton of affections

I am the woman inside your thoughts
Dancing in harmony to your hearts beating rhyme

I am the lady in black
Whom will mourn at your funeral

I am the one who kisses the fool
After all, tiss I who picked you


Notes: Written from the woman's perspective ( I think )

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Jill Spagnola April 28, 2015 at 9:33 PM Your visuals match your poetry so well I have greatly enjoyed each of your poems I have read thus far, Jill Arthur Vaso April 30, 2015 at 12:49 AM Thank you Jill, I sure had fun with that!

Eve Roper March 13, 2015 at 11:05 PM You did a good job on the Lady's perspective. 7 Arthur Vaso March 13, 2015 at 11:08 PM Thanks Eve

Jan Allison March 12, 2015 at 8:08 PM I too love the final line - i proposed to my hubby .... say no more lol:-) a 7 from me:-) Hugs jan xx Arthur Vaso March 13, 2015 at 11:07 PM Thanks Jan! Hugs

Emile Pinet March 12, 2015 at 4:04 PM A well structured poem with a emotional release launching it into our hearts. Emile. Arthur Vaso March 13, 2015 at 11:06 PM Thank you Emile!!!!

Andrea Dietrich March 10, 2015 at 6:16 PM Interestingly done,Arthur. I especially like the last one! Arthur Vaso March 10, 2015 at 8:57 PM Thank you!

Cecilia Macfarlane March 10, 2015 at 12:10 PM Your perspective is precise, this made me smile. Terrific write Arthur! Hugs Arthur Vaso March 10, 2015 at 6:14 PM Thank you Cecilia :)

Poesy Relish March 10, 2015 at 11:30 AM It sure is from a womans perspective... being the damsel in distress, the cherry and the one who kisses the fool lol... :)... nice obe Arthur.. nad Arthur Vaso March 10, 2015 at 6:14 PM Thank you :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 10, 2015 at 12:14 AM Well-written from the woman's perspective, Arthur, especially that last line. BTW, forgot to thank you for the sweet comment about my son in my avatar...hugs, Rhonda Arthur Vaso March 10, 2015 at 6:13 PM Thanks Rhonda

Njeri Hunjeri March 10, 2015 at 12:04 AM It does sound like a woman's perspective:-) my fav line " I am the woman inside your thoughts Dancing in harmony to your hearts beating rhyme" Arthur Vaso March 10, 2015 at 6:13 PM Thank you njeri