Easy Prey

He saw her, as soon as he entered the room
It wasn’t her beauty, although she was pretty;
pretty drunk. It was her voice that he heard,
The giggle, that hideous giggle.
She sat on the sofa, glass of Jack Daniels in hand
The bottle, on the floor, half hidden along side the sofa.

He grabbed a drink, not too strong
And moved in on her.

“Hi” he said, fancy a drink? unknown to her 
He was already pouring her one.
“fancy going somewhere else”?…. she giggled
He stroked her hair, sliding his hand onto her shoulder
Slowly moving down her front, stopping
Just before her breasts…. testing the water!

He paid compliments, she fell in love.

She staggered across the room
Was it the drink or the heels?
Maybe that’s why no-one helped or advised.
Friendless! Or did they know her of old?

As they stepped outside the room, she glanced at the stairs
But he had other ideas, he held her hand tight, 
And walked down the hall towards  the basement door

Checking that no-one was watching he opened the door
Switched on the light, to reveal a precarious set of steps
Confidently he walked down…quietly, willingly she followed

They stepped onto a cold stone floor…. their steps echoed
She could feel the dampness!
In the empty room, except for one cupboard in the corner
He swung her around, pushed her back to the cupboard
And in a flash she could feel his fingers at the top of her panties
In a second they were at her ankles!

She looked upwards and heard the noise of music and laughter above her
She then felt herself being lifted and sat on the stained top
He lifted her dress, and fell to his knees...... the music had gone

She had only felt pleasure like this a few times before,
She felt like screaming, but as though he knew, he instinctively
Put his hand over her mouth…..
He stood up and as he entered her, her back arched and thrust 
Her firm breasts forward, nipples taut, his mouth encased them
She could feel his teeth, intense power
Inside she was dancing!

A final thrust ensured they united together
She sat there gasping, he turned, slowly walked away
Then stopped and said, “I’ll go back up, our guests will wonder 
Were we are”………. she looked, smiled and thought
No they won’t ……

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 2/27/2012 2:39:00 AM
Allan congrats on your win..David
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Date: 2/26/2012 4:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement in Joe Flach's "Twisted Minds" contest Allan. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/25/2012 9:52:00 PM
Allan this is a great twist, never figured on the hosts having a tete a tete, well placed 2nd, really enjoyed it!
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Date: 2/25/2012 4:51:00 PM
Thanks for entering my contest Allan and congratulations on your high ranking. This was a fun story to read - pretty hot there, at times - and left the reader wondering about what exactly was going on. Was this someone being taken advantage of? Both willing parties? Was evil involved here? Then to find out they were the couple hosting the party ... awesome. Sometimes a happenstance encounter with our own partner is the best surprise of all. Thanks again for entering this into my contest.
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Date: 2/25/2012 4:35:00 PM
Hey, you scored BIG time with this one. BIG congrats to you.
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Date: 2/9/2012 2:02:00 AM
No they won`t.... - oxox hugs Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/8/2012 5:36:00 PM
You changed it a LOT.(well, I should say added to it) So I see it was my third possible scenario that you opted for!! Great Climax. heehee. (I think word taught you mean is spelled "taut")
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Date: 2/8/2012 1:19:00 PM
LOL, especially love the witty ending
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Date: 2/8/2012 7:51:00 AM
Yeah i got in the story too Andrea.. Intriguing poem with much to ask and ponder :) Charma
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Date: 2/6/2012 8:12:00 PM
Hey, you stopped too soon. I wanted to see what happened to her. Was her predator a rapist, a killer or just another guy looking to score? this could go so many ways. I love the description. Made me get right in the story!!
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