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I remembered being on a bus with my dad today
Passing an old decrepit man out jogging and I began to giggle
To which my father retorted laugh away 
At least he is competing whereas you are merely commentating
Glued to the bench last out the trench
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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July 13, 2011 at 11:16 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Christopher. Thank you for sharing and I will be back again soon to read more of your writing. Love, Carol
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