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Easter Surprise

With my dark brown velvety chocolaty eyes I am melting your heart well that’s a good start As I draw you within I am calming your soul watching you trusting you falling in love with you Please take me home do not leave me alone I beg don’t resist as your heartstrings I twist with my dark brown velvety chocolaty eyes Tis me your very own Easter Surprise… Written 18th April 2019 The surprise is whatever you want it to be… Contest A STRAND (1066) Sponsor Brian Strand FIRST PLACE

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Brenda Chiri

Date: 2/6/2022 1:30:00 AM

Ann congrats on your win!;?

Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/8/2022 11:47:00 PM

Thank you dear Brenda with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/5/2022 12:12:00 PM

Congratulations on this win. Your "EASTER SURPRISE" is a cute/fun Easter write. Many years ago, I had a dark brown chocolate bunny. Have a blessed day/weekend.............

Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/8/2022 11:47:00 PM

Many thanks dear Paula, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/27/2019 2:35:00 AM

For me, this is a puppy,pure and simple.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/8/2022 11:46:00 PM

Bless you dear Caren ~ with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/19/2019 6:00:00 PM

well, I say it's a bunny rabbit!! But if it is actually made of chocolate , it better not trust me, for I will eat it! Cute poem, Ann

Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/20/2019 7:07:00 AM

Hurrah, give the lady a prize! Many Easters ago my Frank gave me the sweetest lop eared bunny whom I named Bertie - I adored him, but like you I could not resist a chocolate bunny, yum, yum....with kindest choccy thoughts Ann xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/19/2019 5:16:00 AM

A darling of a poem! So sweetly romantic dearest, Ann!

Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/19/2019 5:47:00 AM

Thank you dearest Demetrios for your lovely comments. I wrote this primarily in the personification mode of maybe a puppy/kitten/bunny/whatever. but really it can be whatever one desires it to be, so Happy Easter with kindest chocolaty thoughts Ann xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/18/2019 10:01:00 PM

Yummy poem, Ann. Happy Easter!

Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/19/2019 5:48:00 AM

Thank you so much for your continued support dear Line, I do so appreciate it and send you lots of chocolaty, yummy kindest Easter thoughts, Ann xx