Ann Gilmour Poet Personification

Easter Surprise

With my 
dark brown 
velvety 
chocolaty 
eyes
I am melting your heart 
well that’s a good start

As I draw you within
I am calming your soul
watching you 
trusting you
falling in love with you

Please take me home
do not leave me alone
I beg don’t resist 
as your heartstrings I twist
with my
dark brown
velvety 
chocolaty 
eyes

Tis me 
your very own
Easter Surprise…

Written 18th April 2019

The surprise is whatever you want it to be…

Contest  A STRAND (1066)
Sponsor Brian Strand
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Brenda Chiri February 6, 2022 at 1:30 AM Ann congrats on your win!;? Ann Gilmour February 8, 2022 at 11:47 PM Thank you dear Brenda with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Paula Goldsmith February 5, 2022 at 12:12 PM Congratulations on this win. Your "EASTER SURPRISE" is a cute/fun Easter write. Many years ago, I had a dark brown chocolate bunny. Have a blessed day/weekend............. Ann Gilmour February 8, 2022 at 11:47 PM Many thanks dear Paula, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Caren Krutsinger April 27, 2019 at 2:35 AM For me, this is a puppy,pure and simple. Ann Gilmour February 8, 2022 at 11:46 PM Bless you dear Caren ~ with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Andrea Dietrich April 19, 2019 at 6:00 PM well, I say it's a bunny rabbit!! But if it is actually made of chocolate , it better not trust me, for I will eat it! Cute poem, Ann Ann Gilmour April 20, 2019 at 7:07 AM Hurrah, give the lady a prize! Many Easters ago my Frank gave me the sweetest lop eared bunny whom I named Bertie - I adored him, but like you I could not resist a chocolate bunny, yum, yum....with kindest choccy thoughts Ann xx

Demetrios Trifiatis April 19, 2019 at 5:16 AM A darling of a poem! So sweetly romantic dearest, Ann! Ann Gilmour April 19, 2019 at 5:47 AM Thank you dearest Demetrios for your lovely comments. I wrote this primarily in the personification mode of maybe a puppy/kitten/bunny/whatever. but really it can be whatever one desires it to be, so Happy Easter with kindest chocolaty thoughts Ann xx

Line Gauthier April 18, 2019 at 10:01 PM Yummy poem, Ann. Happy Easter! Ann Gilmour April 19, 2019 at 5:48 AM Thank you so much for your continued support dear Line, I do so appreciate it and send you lots of chocolaty, yummy kindest Easter thoughts, Ann xx