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Easter Paradigms

the triumphal cross
bunnies, eggs and fluffy chicks
schism of festival

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5-7-5 (howmanysyllables.com and syllablecount.com)

16th April 2017

For the "Easter Haiku or Senryu" contest sponsored by Laura Loo.
(First Place)

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Eve Roper Date: 4/22/2017 6:34:00 PM Well said, John, congratulations on your win. ~* Login to Reply

Lisa Ricci Date: 4/17/2017 10:54:00 AM Morning John. This is lovely with marvelous imagery of the day and moment in time. Well done entirely with the format. I found it to be true along with its tone and voice. Login to Reply John Michaels Date: 4/22/2017 5:46:00 AM Thank you very much, Lisa. Much appreciated. All the best, John.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/16/2017 8:27:00 PM I really like this one. YOu too did a great blend of the fun part and the religious. Login to Reply John Michaels Date: 4/17/2017 5:16:00 AM Thanks so much, Andrea. You wouldn't believe the number of discarded potential last lines I had for this one!! Regards, John.

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 4/16/2017 1:08:00 PM A fine entry for the contest John. Happy Easter. 7 ; ) Login to Reply John Michaels Date: 4/17/2017 5:17:00 AM Thank you for your kind comments. Regards, John.

Paul Callus Date: 4/16/2017 11:58:00 AM Easter as seen from different points of view; the spiritual versus the commercial. gl in the contest. // paul Login to Reply John Michaels Date: 4/16/2017 12:07:00 PM Exactly right! Thanks for your comments - good luck yourself, Paul! Regards, John.