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As doubts wrestle within my heart, my path is suddenly unclear. For barraged by lies and deceit, I'm left on the verge of a tear. An alternate reality concealed what I refused to see. For I was infatuated with the girl who claimed to love me. Separate and yet connected, I was easily led astray. And we shared intimate moments, till betrayal took them away. A clash of rival emotions fuels both desire and fury. And in judgment of these feelings, truth presides as judge and jury. Delusion morphs into despair, triggering thoughts of suicide. But I refuse to take that road and quickly push those thoughts aside. Despite her manipulation, I'll miss her charisma and charm. And yet, I choose to walk away and not ignore my heart's alarm.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/17/2018 5:09:00 AM
You are the perfect writer in this form.. your skills shine through, I loved this piece!
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Date: 7/17/2018 7:56:00 AM
Thank you so much Lyric Man, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/16/2018 10:10:00 PM
Great poem, Emile. I can surely relate.
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Date: 7/17/2018 7:56:00 AM
Thanks Carole, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/16/2018 8:12:00 PM
Well done, Emile.
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Date: 7/17/2018 7:56:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Book: Shattered Sighs