Earthworm Ancient One

earthworm ancient one wears pants up under his arms.. karote black belt
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Mac Donald Avatar
June 4, 2012 at 5:46 PM
Must make his opponents look and wonder? A fun write, Sara! Best wishes, love, Mikki
Deeks Avatar
June 4, 2012 at 12:20 AM
How endearing... i see the little fella, arms ready to do the hia... ah move... i know he wouldnt have them but still at this mo after your words ... he has :)
Horne Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 9:12 AM
LOL, I can just picture this - had a chuckle
Dietrich Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 8:19 PM
this sure paints a funny picture, Sara.
Onclaud Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 1:31 PM
i needed the laughs, sara... grreat way to end this remarkable 'ku!..:) huggs!
Ink-U-Script Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 12:44 PM
Funny!!
Poet Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 12:15 PM
Haha...enjoyed the humour very much Sara.
The Drunken Poet Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 11:55 AM
Superb haiku!!!I was well enjoyed!!!
Kendrick Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 11:54 AM
Everyone this was just for fun..Not looking for criticism on how a Haiku should be done...Sara
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