Earthworm Ancient One

earthworm ancient one wears pants up under his arms.. karote black belt

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Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 6/4/2012 5:46:00 PM

Must make his opponents look and wonder? A fun write, Sara! Best wishes, love, Mikki

Karen Deeks

Date: 6/4/2012 12:20:00 AM

How endearing... i see the little fella, arms ready to do the hia... ah move... i know he wouldnt have them but still at this mo after your words ... he has :)

Jack Horne

Date: 6/2/2012 9:12:00 AM

LOL, I can just picture this - had a chuckle

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/1/2012 8:19:00 PM

this sure paints a funny picture, Sara.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/1/2012 1:31:00 PM

i needed the laughs, sara... grreat way to end this remarkable 'ku!..:) huggs!

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 6/1/2012 12:44:00 PM

Funny!!

Kash Poet

Date: 6/1/2012 12:15:00 PM

Haha...enjoyed the humour very much Sara.

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 6/1/2012 11:55:00 AM

Superb haiku!!!I was well enjoyed!!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/1/2012 11:54:00 AM

Everyone this was just for fun..Not looking for criticism on how a Haiku should be done...Sara