Earths Womb

ocean cries as tears of crystal overflow the land earths womb gives birth to many newborns.

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Sandra Adams

Date: 3/26/2020 10:25:00 AM

this is a wonderful haiku M.L... nice penning!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/30/2020 5:43:00 PM

Thank you Sandra.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 3/25/2020 1:36:00 PM

Although many Native Americans credit their origin to the centre of the earth, Apaches rose from the ocean, so your Tanka hits the nail on the head! Aloha! Rico

M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/30/2020 5:43:00 PM

Many thanks my poet friend. Aloha to you.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/24/2020 10:47:00 PM

Pretty tanka my friend. Reminds me of spring.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/30/2020 5:44:00 PM

Yeah...it's here!

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 3/24/2020 3:36:00 PM

In few meaningful lines, you have rendered the boundless beauty and wealth of Mother Earth, M.L. Kiser! An impressive imagery! Best regards and blessings.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/30/2020 5:44:00 PM

Thank you so much, blessings to you as well and do stay well.