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Earth's Monorhyme

Looking for whom I used to be Finding a place that is me Crawling again on my knee wiping the fog off Reality It seems no one is able to see and hear my screams and my plea "Pull off that knife but don't flee - Sit down please, listen, agree..." I'm dying, I know, I foresee Life had been nothing but potpourri You're born and I lost that dear, golden key that unlocks the secret of Eternity My continents hurt and my Sea As if I am stung by a huge Killer bee MAN was supposed to be my Trustee I am dying, I know, I foresee...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/16/2012 4:26:00 PM
You're such a gifted poet; always bringing something special to read, dear Iolanda! Just know that you're not alone even though it may seem that way at times..God's still in control and you know how much he loves you!? Love, Annalise
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Date: 11/16/2012 3:38:00 PM
A FANTASTIC write, Iolanda! Wonderful use of personification. The last line is tragic, but powerful. Great work. Love, Kim
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